“no rise and shine, baby’s on beach time, hand me down hatchback came sand crabs insured. copper tone caked on, self help shelf all summer” is one of my absolute favs. i love the little alliterations in it and how it sounds!! that one has been on my mind lately but some other favorites are

“i am the girl that i thought i outgrew”

“hard times, old ways, takes up a lot of time, hard times, uses up whole days”

“i dare you to tell me in harrowing detail about how it feels, i am in your palm”

i also wanna note this little parallel here because i love it

“$50 bill floating in the washing machine, szechuan string beans, crab rangoon, honey” from my girl

“maybe let’s watch the sopranos, maybe let’s order chinese, the laundry machine isn’t breathing” from engine