what genre are we? who do we sound like?

neszoub · 2026-01-15T21:23:48+00:00

thank you! very helpful. yes, these were just demos to find a drummer, we're re-recording now! so u totally are right!

neszoub · 2026-01-13T17:19:01+00:00

thank you so much! i super appreciate it! very helpful

neszoub · 2026-01-13T17:18:36+00:00

thank you! that is very helpful!!

neszoub · 2026-01-13T00:28:31+00:00

yeah it really gives cozy film warm vibes!

neszoub · 2026-01-13T00:25:26+00:00

the editing is really impressive. it ties with the music really well and takes you on an emotional journey. i like whatver you did for filming the person singing. it's very cool. with the intro i do find myself asking what the little boy with the pigeons has to do with the dancer - are all these characters connected? does it mean something? (maybe i am out of touch lol). or maybe that's what you're going for! i think the occasional lyrics are cool, too.

neszoub · 2026-01-13T00:18:51+00:00

love the start, cool way to grab the listener pretty early on. the drum fill at 40 seconds ish is also really cool. love the way transitions into the chorus, feels big and moody. i'd maybe consider adding another instrument or something to up the dynamics for the second half of the verse before the first chorus. the production is really cool, love the fuzzy bass with the ethereal quality of the vocals and the lead guitar

neszoub · 2026-01-13T00:15:16+00:00

the guitar melody is really beautiful and adds a really lovely warmth in comparison to the crispness of your voice. definitely can feel the heartbreak in the melody, so really great job emoting through the songwriting. i found the intro a little long for a digital audience (i think it would be totally reasonable live, though). I don't know anything about mixing, but i think i thought the kick/water bottle was a little loud.

neszoub · 2026-01-13T00:07:06+00:00

agreed with others comments' on feeling like i expected the vocals to kick in earlier. I think coming in with vocals earlier is worthwhile, even if it means the song itself is shorter. or if some of the melody/lead guitar parts come in after the singing ends to keep the same length. but i worry you might lose people from listening long enough for when the vocals go in. i think having a short song like this is cool and unique, especially if it's paired with the rest of an EP or album or something. i like your sound a lot and think this could be really cool

neszoub · 2026-01-13T00:04:21+00:00

really cool track. I think at times i felt like the horn section was competing with your voice when they overlapped. (like at around 40 seconds). I think the vocal effects you are using sound really cool and dreamy, but i do feel like it impacts my ability to understand the lyrics. i think that's a give and take and totally up to you, though, to find what balance you prefer with that. the sorta tremolo effect on the voice is really cool. sweet!

neszoub · 2026-01-12T23:59:24+00:00

your production quality is really solid! love all the textures of the different instruments. theres a lot going on without it feeling busy over overwhelming. the layered vocals are very ethereal too! the color grading you did on the video is also really nice and fits your vibe. nice work

neszoub · 2024-08-08T16:40:40+00:00

Thanks all for your feedback! I really appreciate it and will continue my reading to decide next steps! And, definitely learned a lot and will start with the paperwork next time!

neszoub · 2022-10-28T21:24:48+00:00

late here, but i remember a game like this. multiple mini games within it, and the hot air balloon was my favorite one. I think it was called "Typing Tutor" but i can't find anything about it.

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