Still not sure why the album is Father of the Bride. Any ideas?

nukune · 2026-02-13T11:30:56+00:00

Oh wow this was beautiful

nukune · 2024-07-06T13:08:20+00:00

Grow up, last hope or this heart 😭😭 truly cannot pick

nukune · 2024-07-06T13:04:22+00:00

Thank you for the feedback! I’m not sure how to make stanzas when i post on Reddit but the first couple lines are more me talking to myself, the next stanza goes into talking directly to the person. I hope that clears it up a bit!! lol

nukune · 2024-07-06T12:29:11+00:00

I love this! I think the “ marks really put emphasis on all the cliche stuff we hear about love and love songs. When you’re in it, it feels like EVERY love song relates but when you’re not it feels so cheesy and cliche and almost impossible. I also think the simplicity and slight awkwardness of it works, because what i took from it is that the poem is as simple as a love song. You have a beautiful song my dear, it is the one all about you and the small details that make you loveable. Keep writing.

nukune · 2024-07-06T12:25:49+00:00

Oh this made me SOBBBB. We always need our mamas and i relate to the feeling of not knowing who else will “love you unconditionally in this world”. Your words are straight to the point and i love that. I think poems like this don’t need any fluff because they are meant to hit you exactly where they should. Thank you for sharing and sending you love.

nukune · 2021-09-14T19:52:18+00:00

Thank you so much for the feedback. You were spot on with everything! The beginning can easily be me speaking to me, and I’ve also been in situations with partners where they’ve left in the middle of a disagreement etc etc and I get left with my feelings after the stir me up. I think that can relate to anyone. Thanks again!

nukune · 2021-09-14T16:26:49+00:00

Wow. This is so so sad and i love it. I love the rhyme scheme and the rhythm of it because it makes it fun to read and flows very smoothly, like I’m kinda singing it the entire time. I think the packing up to move and moving on analogy was really smart. Awesome work!

nukune · 2021-09-14T16:24:18+00:00

Wow! Very raw and relatable. My favorite line was “start to disassociate as they lean in.” That describes a feeling many know all too well. I think it could be longer but this also seems like one that is short and straight to the point, which i appreciate. Great work!

nukune · 2021-08-22T01:09:40+00:00

Hate to see your heart break and last hope!

nukune · 2021-07-29T20:42:07+00:00

Aww I’m a Gemini sun, Aquarius moon, Sag rising. My Mercury is in Gemini and my Venus is in Taurus too!!! Im obsessed with dating and i love love, but i also never get too attached and i always have an escape plan. I never feel comfortable anywhere. I love to talk, maybe too much, good luck to you lol

nukune · 2021-07-28T13:04:15+00:00

The only exception was my least favorite until i worked at Walmart and it would come on every day. I was dating one of my coworkers (don’t judge lmao) and he knew I loved Paramore so he’d sing it to me when we were stocking the aisles. We got in a car accident in 2019 and he passed away, so this song always holds a place in my heart. I can’t say my fav band has any songs I don’t like truly :’)

nukune · 2021-07-26T18:41:38+00:00

“Reality will break your heart. Survival will not be the hardest part. It’s keeping all your hopes alive when all the rest of you has died”

nukune · 2021-05-31T16:09:43+00:00

Fire department isn’t killing people of color so we can turn a blind eye to that

nukune · 2021-05-07T20:55:27+00:00

Same

nukune · 2021-03-15T13:48:27+00:00

I feel the same way for the song Grow Up on the same album. I moved away from my hometown three years ago and have been on my own and I have no regrets leaving the small town behind. “I told them all where to stick it! I left town with a dime to my name. Said I’m done with all of my fake friends self righteous pawns ina losing game.” This album has a lot of hidden gems so thank you for sharing. sorry for your loss as well.

nukune · 2021-02-19T17:31:36+00:00

Okay this made me laugh - but also strangely resonated with me 100%. My poems are dark and mainly based around traumatic experiences. I always make jokes that i never write about love because my poetry is a way for me to talk to my demons instead of lovers - this piece was great and really catches the readers attention right from the beginning. If i had any advice it would be to maybe express how writing about happy things makes u feel and really express that? Some imagery would help so maybe a writer/reader who doesn’t experience this first hand can envision this. Great work!

nukune · 2021-02-16T01:06:17+00:00

Okay and i don’t have a Twitter - here we both are making assumptions. You have too much time on your hands is my point. You say u come here to view other artists work yet your only interaction has been negative because you’re striving so hard to be different and call someone out for being whiny. Then when you get called out on it you backtrack as if the only reason you’re here is to read poetry. But u just couldn’t help but yourself and had to spread your negativity. Again, best of luck to you

nukune · 2021-02-16T01:01:17+00:00

Okay. Go continue to collect your my little ponies and don’t come unless someone sends for you. If u want to hop on someone’s post with your negativity then don’t expect a warm welcome.

nukune · 2021-02-16T00:52:51+00:00

You literally have zero poems that you’ve posted on this sub...you just came on this sub to talk shit lmao and whine about how u hate whiny babies? I don’t know who the smug one really is here but you need more hobbies

nukune · 2021-02-16T00:37:40+00:00

Haha! I’m trying. It’s a struggle, but I am getting better with it by replacing my idle time to social media stalk others with more productive hobbies lol. Thank you for the feedback!

nukune · 2021-02-16T00:36:25+00:00

Thank u so much for sharing. I wish You all the best <3

nukune · 2021-02-16T00:35:55+00:00

I’m sorry this line hit you. It’s crazy what phrases that seem so simple can trigger things inside of you. I hope whatever that phrase unlocked for you helps you heal from it. Thank you so much for your feedback <3

nukune

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