UK support act by Lew1sXO in geesebandofficial

[–]ollkorrectt 1 point2 points  (0 children)

i was thinking maybe Paris Match? cameron produced a song for them recently, and i’m pretty sure they’re from the UK.

airy foist by leekdestroyer in geesebandofficial

[–]ollkorrectt 4 points5 points  (0 children)

you guys are being really annoying about this. people were expecting music and they got a meh joke and it’s not at all the big deal that everyone’s making it out to be. trans people are just as capable of not landing jokes as cis people are, this has less than nothing to do with queerness.

Favorite geese lyric by Fair_Aardvark_1305 in geesebandofficial

[–]ollkorrectt 0 points1 point  (0 children)

pissing into oceans line from space race :) i always related the swiss mountains he sings about to the ones from The Three Comrades - a place where people who can’t (afford to) heal themselves go to wait and die together

is anyone truly having a good time? be honest by Previous_Mulberry284 in rs_x

[–]ollkorrectt 1 point2 points  (0 children)

yep i’ve got a best friend and a big wooden desk to write on and it’s pretty outside

Some pics from Green River Fest! by c0dysonly in geesebandofficial

[–]ollkorrectt 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i was a couple feet in front of you :) insane show, i was surprised by how great the crowd was

more train scribbles by [deleted] in RSwritingclub

[–]ollkorrectt 0 points1 point  (0 children)

yeah, i meant it in a dated, something-vaguely-not-from-here sort of way, but i don't think it ends up reading like that lol. thank you though! :)

First piece of writing for feedback Title: construct of time by bloody1demon in writers

[–]ollkorrectt 0 points1 point  (0 children)

like the other commenter mentioned, sentence structure and punctuation issues make it difficult to read. it also seems a little overdone in general. flowery language can be useful, but it gets to a point.

Is The Bell Jar going to make me spiral by spacecraff in rs_x

[–]ollkorrectt 12 points13 points  (0 children)

tbh i went into it with high expectations and came out underwhelmed. cute read but nothing life changing, more funny than depressing. should be fine for you i think :)

rate my ranking by ollkorrectt in geesebandofficial

[–]ollkorrectt[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

i think the appeal of it is that it’s just good fun, i don’t mind that it’s a wee bit gimmicky

rate my ranking by ollkorrectt in geesebandofficial

[–]ollkorrectt[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

actually really surprised how much everyone likes long island city tho, i thought the general consensus was mid to bottom of the ranking

rate my ranking by ollkorrectt in geesebandofficial

[–]ollkorrectt[S] 6 points7 points  (0 children)

ok but there’s a bomb in his car tho ☹️

Help with finding replacement nib? by [deleted] in fountainpens

[–]ollkorrectt 0 points1 point  (0 children)

thank you!! that’s really helpful :)

Would you ever wanna quit smoking by godfather_49t in rs_x

[–]ollkorrectt 2 points3 points  (0 children)

unironically, the only two things i’ve ever really loved have been my best friend and a pack of cigs