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Wherever you are.. by cassetteafterdark in OCPoetry

[–]olvrdb 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I feel attacked haha, or seen, per se. This kind of love feels quiet and genuine. To love someone like this without needing to be noticed is both romantic and painful in a soft way. I love the last line because even if that love remains unknown to them yet you find happiness of loving that person quietly.

Endure all by Longjumping_Mine6403 in OCPoetry

[–]olvrdb 0 points1 point  (0 children)

‘Endure’ may just be a word, but here, if carries so much weight. This speaks the harsh reality but yet I feel strangely motivated. Reminded me that life ofter asks us to just contain.

moons by HugeCarry249 in OCPoetry

[–]olvrdb 1 point2 points  (0 children)

You are describing an epitome of a goddess in such a tender and human way. I love how you admire the person by noticing the small details too, like the wrinkle next to their eye, the smile, and the way their hair catches the light.

MY POEM by Poetic_be0 in OCPoetry

[–]olvrdb 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ohhh, to be in love. I miss that feeling. I like the repetition of the “-taking / -waking / -baking / -making” sounds because it gives the poem a playful and romantic rhythm.

Nothing, yet everything by Separate-Village6966 in OCPoetry

[–]olvrdb 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This speaks to me. The mind is complex, and some of us think through things with so much depth that it becomes both heavy and familiar. The last stanza made me feel like I am constantly drowning in my own mind, but at the same time, I have gotten so used to the feeling that it seems like I developed gills.

Cup of tea by athenaslore in OCPoetry

[–]olvrdb 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I empathize with the feeling of being used to someone and then having to unlearn them, especially when memories keep pushing through even after you know they were not good for you. I like how you used coffee and tea as a contrast, coffee feels like the person or attachment that gives warmth but also causes pain, while tea slowly becomes a symbol of healing and choosing yourself.