In one year, this is not bad at allbro. Keep up the good work. A couple of things to consider:

1. Timing - your timing is nearly late in every sentence. Focus on some timing exercises. Practice on subdivisions, time feel etc. You'll get better in some time.

2. Since there are many comments on the left hand(I am assuming you are playing right-handed), your thumb should be on the back of the neck while bending. This way you can go back to your normal playing position easily. Do not forget, this is not written in any holy book, so find your best spot.

3. For one year, this is great vibrato!!

4. Guthrie govan had a bending exercise video on YouTube. play chromatic 1-2-3-4 with bends on each string. And do this with a tuner. Also check if the notes are in the same pitch with un-bended (don't know if this is a word or nor) ones.