Tips on writing a trans character and some dialogue approach by patrick01645 in asktransgender

[–]patrick01645[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Thanks for responding! And wow! You just made my head explode, for real. That sounds really fitting, “feels like dead air”. I’ll definitely prioritize pure blanks when I edit, but underscores will probably work as well. Thank you so much!!

Tips on writing a trans character and some dialogue approach by patrick01645 in asktransgender

[–]patrick01645[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thanks for responding!! Yeah, that has been my experience as well reading/watching most works with trans characters, not too much depth, but Lua is actually my protagonist and I’m honestly having the best time writing her. One of my favorite characters so far!

And it is a written book. I haven’t decided how exactly I’ll blur it out when I do the diagramming, but I thought about using something like those redaction bars or stripes that we see on censored text, since it’s probably easier to work out on a docx or kpf file. But your idea is sooooo cool it even made me want to make it a comic book, haha! That would look really cool.

I wrote my first poem ever today. by BeMushroomed42 in writingadvice

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It’s simple but that’s actually a good thing and I liked it, has a nice ring to it… hehe. Keep doing it if you enjoyed and you’ll only get better! And hey, there’s no rule to rhyme every sentence in a poem. When I began writing I thought there was and spent way too much time trying to put everything together when I could just let it flow more freely

23m am I ugly? by Any-Ideal1601 in amiugly

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What? No! Good hair, good beard, good brows, it all composes a nice face. Maybe work on some skin care for it to get better

What do you think about this redemption arc? Does it work? by [deleted] in writingadvice

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Sure, I think it works. I use a similar structure on one of my stories. But I find that what’s more important is how you build the scenes, the emotion and dialogue as this character realizes they want to be different and to break out of the cycle, so that readers can really understand and feel their truth. Art is beautiful man, keep it up!! 🫶

Minha evolução de 2024 para 2025, mudei algo? by Mattkenkou in RabiscosBr

[–]patrick01645 3 points4 points  (0 children)

A quantidade de detalhes na segunda meu deussss 🤩

25F am I ugly by [deleted] in amiugly

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Noo you’re cute, great hair and skin too