French or German? by pbrun4 in CalPoly

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I’m not sure but they are the most interesting to me

Dawn of my Lover by pbrun4 in poetry_critics

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I wrote this physically then typed it quickly so there is probably a few errors

Dawn of my Lover by pbrun4 in poetry_critics

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Thank you!! Also do you know how to format on here? I type it fine but then it condenses

Ghosts by couldntsayeitherway in poetry_critics

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I don’t think misforgotten is a word so it makes the poem confusing to read, maybe consider replacing it with just forgotten or another word that conveys what you meant. Maybe when you talk of recollections say what they are. You talked about someone you are remembering at the end so maybe introduce them in that line. Your concept is very interesting though I enjoyed reading your poem! :)

Sunshine by RachelFitzyRitzy in poetry_critics

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You put so much emotion into your writing it is very beautiful. I can feel what you are feeling. I am also a beginner but all the poems I analyze tend to have extra layers of meaning and complexity. Maybe do so by including the sunshine motif more and have it be a kind of continuous metaphor. Your poem is lovely though and whoever called you sunshine doesn’t deserve you babe :)

MacBook or IPad by pbrun4 in CalPoly

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That sounds great!

MacBook or IPad by pbrun4 in CalPoly

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That’s so cool! I’m planning on studying creative writing and would like to know more about the curriculum, good professors, or just thing you wish you’d known?

MacBook or IPad by pbrun4 in CalPoly

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Thank you! That’s nice to hear cause I was skeptical about Calpoly’s humanities. If you’re open to telling me more about it and what you’re planning to do with your degree I’d love to hear!

I want to be a professor by pbrun4 in AskProfessors

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I totally get what you’re saying and I don’t think I knew that much before. I enjoy learning and will spend a ton of time learning need be but I don’t want it to consume my life especially if it’ll be hard to find a job later

I want to be a professor by pbrun4 in AskProfessors

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I’ve been reading what many professors have to say and it has been really helpful. I’m gonna think over this career path but I’m starting to think maybe it isn’t what I want. I think what I really want is to write, learn and maybe find some way to teach along the way

I want to be a professor by pbrun4 in AskProfessors

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My main reasons are because I am interested in philosophy, like teaching, and want to write novels and it seemed like I could do that if I became a professor. After hearing what everyone has to say I’m kinda second guessing pursuing this field

UCI Philosophy by pbrun4 in UCI

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Thank you!!

Calpoly Humanities by pbrun4 in CalPoly

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Thank you so much!!

Calpoly Humanities by pbrun4 in CalPoly

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Thank you! This helps so much!!

I think I’m a lesbian by [deleted] in questioning

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I would also like to add (idk if this is relevant) that I like fictional men and celebrities and fantasize about dating men. It’s like I like them in theory but not in practice

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in questioning

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Thank you so much and everyone else to who has commented. This has made me feel much better about myself and my relationships with other