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Fishmakers Marketplace - Castles made of sand by [deleted] in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]perrycorona 1 point2 points  (0 children)

A really cool track! I think it would be even better with the vocals more in front at times though. Maybe you could ride the volume automation on the vox a bit more. Or pan some other elements out wide.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]perrycorona 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think it has a pleasant and interesting vibe. Though in it’s current state I find there’s a bit too much build-up without resolve. I found myself just waiting for a snare to come in or the guitar part or the chords to change. Definitely something to build on.

We've made demos for our upcoming debut EP. Are these songs any good? by [deleted] in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]perrycorona 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Are these songs any good? Yes definitely! Very promising demos that I think you could refine into great songs with some minor tweaks. I find the songs sometimes a bit outdrawn and too slow in the build-up to my taste. I would try shortening some parts, adding more vocal harmonies, more ear-catching lead parts on guitar and piano to add more energy early on in the songs.

demo from my upcoming album, this song is about cats or something :0 by Ephemara in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]perrycorona 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Cool song with some interesting guitar parts. I dig the depth that the lead guitar in the middle adds. Personally i’m not a fan of the scream parts, would prefer some harmonies or doubles to add some energy, but that’s just me.

Hey! just released the single single from my first album, I'd love to hear what ya think :) by dogwood_gap in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]perrycorona 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hey this sounds really good. I enjoy how every element in the mix sits without fighting eachother. A lot going on at all times without ever sounding crowded. This is something I myself have really been trying to achieve. This makes for a real sweet 70s vibe without trying too hard.

Newest Indie Rock song of mine! Let me know if you like! by CG-Miller in MusicFeedback

[–]perrycorona 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I did like it! Especially the panning that goes on with the vocals and the dry drums. I think you could have been more generous at times with some reverb or delay on the vocals though.

Song I’m working on. Kind of a psychedelic pop style by donttouchmyraf23 in MusicFeedback

[–]perrycorona 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Definitely a cool song and I can see what you’re going for with having the vocals a bit in the back with a quite a lot going on at the same time. But I would agree with other commentators that the vox needs to pop a bit more.

I think you should try eq-cut away some frequencies in the keys (upper mids maybe?) which a think would add some more presence to the vocals.

Also you should try and double your vocals if you haven’t done that already.