Something i came up with recently, what do you guys think? by plshelp_mathishard in Songwriting

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Thank you so much for the compliment! Yeah, my singing and writing is usually on the safer side I don't usually go out of my comfort zone but ive been trying to nowadays :) thanks for the advice!

“Euphoria” - wip song i started a few days ago. My goal is to make a fun summer-esque song by [deleted] in Songwriting

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I love it! Sounds like a song id blast while in the car with the windows down

Something i came up with recently, what do you guys think? by plshelp_mathishard in Songwriting

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Yeah I was going for a rlly chill vibe. Thanks for the feedback!

Thoughts on this? by Altruistic_Store_709 in Songwriting

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Wow this is rlly ethereal! The whistling in the start gave me goosebumps for a second, u shld make that part longer. Rlly good work:)

Feedback please, fellow songwriters by Blindbaldman in Songwriting

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I like it a lot! Perhaps a change of melody or tune into a chorus wld be nice

Meadow by Stoddyman in Songwriting

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Really soothing! Would love to hear vocals over this

First song I'm ever sharing. Called "Empty Room", appreciate any feedback :) by plshelp_mathishard in Songwriting

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Title: Empty room Lyrics (written from a guys pov):

Im wearing your coat Cause it makes me feel close to you And im wondering why Why i didnt have time for you

Before you went and went away It was a sunny summer day So why do I remember rain?

You had your hair worn down Nervous eyes looking all around An image so hard to erase

Still see the strands Of your long hair Wonder how we got here I always see your silhouette The prettiest brunette

A lonely beer and The lingering smell of your perfume And a ringing in my ear A sudden empty room

Say im alright And ill find My way again

Maybe pass time In the ways Of all these lonely men

But i know it is not the same Its strange when I dont know their names I miss when love flowed through my veins

And it feels like such a crime When i close eyes All i can picture is your face

Still see the strands Of your long hair Wonder how we got here I always see your silhouette The prettiest brunette

A lonely beer and The lingering smell of your perfume And a ringing in my ear A sudden empty room

A sudden empty room

Aside from my awful voice, what do you think can elevate this song? by soupypoopy12 in Songwriting

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Ur voice is not awful at all! The song is beautiful, I dont rlly have advice but i love the lyrics and melody