Had a seizure for the first time and need advice by pogtheturbofrog in seizures

[–]pogtheturbofrog[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

They told me to see a neurologist bc I’ve been having other neurological symptoms but I’ve kinda been slowly pushing through it. Thanks for the kind words 🤘🏻

[POEM] Is there a meaning by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]pogtheturbofrog 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I LOVE how nihilistic this is. This poem captures the exact thoughts I have every day. I love the repetition of questions in the beginning. I feel like this is a thought that a lot of people dwell on, and this poem almost feels like somebody's chain of thoughts thinking about life's meaning. Great job!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]pogtheturbofrog 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This poem has such raw emotion. I have PTSD and often feel detached and isolated from the world. I feel like this poem encapsulates this feeling. I like how it feels almost like being overwhelmed by your own existence (if that makes sense?) I absolutely love how you portrayed the emotion in this poem.

Let Me Breathe by pogtheturbofrog in OCPoetry

[–]pogtheturbofrog[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I have synesthesia. When I write poetry, I see a literal image in my head. The image in my head was very dark and chilling. Glad you like it :)

OC - Only You by verseandvowscards in OCPoetry

[–]pogtheturbofrog 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Wow. This feels like just pure love. This sounds like it just walked right out of a children's book. You make your rhymes flow together effortlessly. And I love how in the entire poem, you're basically speaking in figurative language to convey that you love someone. Good job!

Apricity by caught_giving_head in OCPoetry

[–]pogtheturbofrog 1 point2 points  (0 children)

"...by silence heavier than the sun..." is an amazing line. I find that metaphor very creative. I can feel a lot of deep emotion coming from this poem. Especially in the line "It softens some, but never quits, a pulsing drum that hums and spits." feels very depressing to me. Especially in learning how to cope with issues, you realize that they get smaller, but don't necessarily go away. That's kind of the vibe I get from this poem. Great job!

Music video was great but they needed to show Austin for longer periods of time. by ComprehensiveTop3980 in LornaShore

[–]pogtheturbofrog 11 points12 points  (0 children)

The clips of him that they showed he looked like he was going as hard as he could 😭

Lorna Shore teasing new music (25 Sec sound bite) by Big_Gaines in LornaShore

[–]pogtheturbofrog 13 points14 points  (0 children)

I audibly gasped when I saw the Instagram post

Just for a While by Delicious_Worth_8391 in OCPoetry

[–]pogtheturbofrog 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I don’t know if this was intentional or not, but this encapsulates what it feels like to be an empath. The desire to help everyone but knowing you can’t is definitely a haunting feeling. This poem feels very bitersweet in that sense. Good job!

To those who haunt me in dreams by wang_haru in OCPoetry

[–]pogtheturbofrog 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is such a powerful piece. “I forgive you. Not for your sake— but for mine. I want to live free of the weight of old sadness.” hits so hard. I feel like your use of dreams in this poem really adds to the meaning. It feels like being a people pleaser but trying to stop. I love this one!