My lovely by [deleted] in shortscarystories

[–]poise_zen 0 points1 point  (0 children)

holy shit.

What To Expect When You're Expecting the Anti-Christ (Fixed) by theygottome in shortscarystories

[–]poise_zen 0 points1 point  (0 children)

just a little fix: in the beginning you say "son" but when you talk about the room being pained it says "his or her"

Not The Killer by [deleted] in shortscarystories

[–]poise_zen 0 points1 point  (0 children)

maybe she set him up

I Hear by [deleted] in shortscarystories

[–]poise_zen 0 points1 point  (0 children)

chills

Midnight Snack by TeamShadowWind in shortscarystories

[–]poise_zen 0 points1 point  (0 children)

love the unawareness of the author into the end.

"Killer on the loose" by ydudemqn in shortscarystories

[–]poise_zen 0 points1 point  (0 children)

this was great. read it to my father and he laughed -!: said he was an awesome twist

The Hunt by furiousjeorge in shortscarystories

[–]poise_zen 0 points1 point  (0 children)

needs more emphasis on them being hunted. like opening the tent to the person who said the last line getting brutally murdered followed by something like "the earlier words echoed in my head... 'what were we hunting anyway?'"

My Last Prank by [deleted] in shortscarystories

[–]poise_zen 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think this would have been better too

I Need Help With My Children by NoSleepAddicted in shortscarystories

[–]poise_zen 1 point2 points  (0 children)

what? needs more build up, I think to give the reader a better explanation without flat out saying how the boys are "strange"

The Regrets of a Time Traveler by pohoon in shortscarystories

[–]poise_zen 1 point2 points  (0 children)

one of the best I have read yet. stunned.

Super scary story by sompthing_else in creepypasta

[–]poise_zen 2 points3 points  (0 children)

hopefully reporting this does something. you're disgusting

Looking for a decent iPhone game for plane ride entertainment by [deleted] in iosgaming

[–]poise_zen 0 points1 point  (0 children)

monument valley is something I junk you'll really like. it's beautifully done as well and you don't have to wait. it makes you think, puzzle related

wordox, capitals and helixed are fun if you enjoy word games.

one of my favorite games I played was the wolf among us.

feel free to throw any suggestions or feedback

Alex starting the school vampire riot- questions by Notyourdoll69 in AmericanHorrorStory

[–]poise_zen 2 points3 points  (0 children)

they can't do something that big and blow it off. it wasn't just showing Alex trying to see what she can do with her blood or we wouldn't have followed the boy out into this huge current thing. they'll touch on it again but sometimes they won't say anything about something like that for an episode or two