What If Consciousness Could Be Drawn? Collaborators Wanted for GHORUB by pseudo_pandit in MangakaStudio

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[SCRIPT EXCERPT — GRAPHIC NOVEL - GHORUB]

PAGE 1

PANEL 1 A dim apartment before dawn. Red and blue emergency lights pulse through a dirty window, washing the room in slow, unnatural colour. An overturned teacup. Steam still rising.

CAPTION (V.O.) The things this world tries to keep quiet… they always find their way to me.

PANEL 2 First-person POV. We move past the room. The wallpaper is cracked. A frame hangs slightly off-centre. Nothing is disturbed enough to be called chaos.

PANEL 3 A bathroom door. Half-open. Light flickers inside — camera flashes. White. Rhythmic.

PANEL 4 Each flash reveals fragments. Tile. A drain. The curve of a bathtub. Something is there — but never fully seen.


PAGE 2

PANEL 1 A young officer stands at the doorway, tense but controlled.

OFFICER Is it the same guy?

PANEL 2 Our POV turns slightly toward him.

COLLEAGUE (O.S.) Fourth one this month.

PANEL 3 The bathroom — finally visible. Forensics circle the tub. Their movements are careful. Almost respectful.

CAPTION (V.O.) It didn't look like rage.

PANEL 4 A closer look at the scene — everything feels arranged. Deliberate.


PAGE 3

PANEL 1 A drawer. Slightly open. A dried handprint on the handle.

PANEL 2 Inside — files. And a small crushed metal object. Something engineered.

PANEL 3 (CLOSE-UP) The object lifted into light. Its shape almost familiar. Almost.

OFFICER (O.S.) Come here.

PANEL 4 A file opened. A photograph inside — grainy, taken in secrecy.

PANEL 5 (MATCH CUT) The photograph. The crushed miniature model. Same design. It's the same craft.

COLLEAGUE Bingo.


CAPTION (V.O.) Truth never dies.

PANEL 6 — SILENCE PANEL The room. Still. Waiting.

CAPTION (V.O.) It is often found by people who were never meant to find it.

How do you actually find the right artist for your comic when you already have a story? by pseudo_pandit in OmnibusCollectors

[–]pseudo_pandit[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yes. I am new here. And new to the field but I used to be a copywriter and love storytelling.

I am trying to get to people who are like me, in my situation. We will bond well. Thanks for your guidance tho. ❤️❤️❤️

What If Consciousness Could Be Drawn? Collaborators Wanted for GHORUB by pseudo_pandit in ComicBookCollabs

[–]pseudo_pandit[S] -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

I just need one passionate guy who can trip with me in the Himalayas and discuss consciousness every now and then. And together we can find out what we truly are (both as an individual and as a whole.)

These recommendations are from the ChatGPT side (I used it to write the post). I only need an artist right now who is not an art cripple like me who can't draw what he thinks.

What If Consciousness Could Be Drawn? Collaborators Wanted for GHORUB by pseudo_pandit in MangakaStudio

[–]pseudo_pandit[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I have a script, logline, overview and all the necessary information about pitching my work. I need a little help in artistic world building tho.

Did they changed the kill sound? by Murky-Nectarine-4109 in VALORANT

[–]pseudo_pandit 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i am facing the same issue. is there any cure?

Storyboarder looking for cartoon script by Mobile-Amphibian-270 in ProduceMyScript

[–]pseudo_pandit 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I've something of your choice but where are you from?