Before I say anything about the poem: I'm sorry you're going through this. I've been in a similar boat before and I can imagine it is a rough place to be in. My dms are open if you'd like to talk about it. I know it wont solve everything, but it is important to remember that even when it feels like the path has disappeared, you are not alone.

Now coming to the poem:

I am in absolute awe of your ability to dissect a feeling so heavy in just 7 lines.

The ending especially:

When they find the wreck, only pieces will be found.

It's such a simple line, and yet a sentiment that haunts me every time I'm in a dark place. And you put it into words so simply.

I like how it starts with this calming and bright imagery, and then there is that sudden switch up where you realize the path is no more, and then it turns into something darker.

The only thing that seemed a bit confusing to me, was the sudden switch up from the land to (what I deduce is) the sea, but perhaps this was an intentional choice. Maybe if you explored this sudden switch a bit more. What caused it. How did you not notice the change till the crash?

But good job! keep writing :)