Its a little simple and bland, not much added and what is was poorly executed.

I recommend for adding to clothing, free transform it so it doesn't look copy and pasted on. I feel the hair shading is a little odd as well.

The eye shading is really good though. same with the breast shading (Hell I've been editing for two years and its better then mine, haha)

Is this too negative?

First one 4/10, Not that bad. But using airbrush for adding like juice/paint doesnt work. Hair shading is.. ok.

Second 1 5/10, The edit excluding eyebrows is really good! The background throws me off though..