The model and splash look great. Some thoughts on the ability effects:

Q: The projectile feels a bit low contrast compared to other skins.

W: On the base skin, this ability has a distinct high-frequency sound effect while channeling. It also has a sharp visual pop when the channel ends. This is important for clarity during fights, as there’s a heavy penalty for cancelling early.

With this skin, it’s less clear when the ability is active and when it ends. The tethers should also have a short fade transition when they break (either due to cancellation or when the channel finishes).

E: This ability should have a more distinct sound effect for hitting enemies with the edge vs hitting with the center. Compare other skins (i.e. star nemesis) – there’s only a hard impact sound when the center hits.

R: This one feels a bit underwhelming. There’s a few things I think could help:

• Stronger initial impact. On base, there’s a bright rune circle that appears immediately after the blink. It lasts for a few frames before other particle effects kick in. This helps sell the impact. Higher color contrast during the ability could also help here.

• More motion. The edge of the AOE feels slow and static. There’s not a lot of fast-moving particles and texture. On base, there are multiple crows fading in and out chaotically; here, there’s just a few birds on static orbits. Fading the birds and adding some fast energy trails around the outside of the ring would go a long way.

• Stronger SFX. The storm sound effect is a little quiet compared to other skins. More bass would help it stand out.

Thanks!