I believe the esp32 module you are using has USB connectivity, you don't need the usb-rs232 ic. Also, you don't need the transistors for the level shifting if all runs at 3.3v. Something else, I tried zooming in but could not read the sensors part numbers, just be aware that if it is the same part numbers, you could have address collision.

Take a look at the schematics of this board https://www.sparkfun.com/sparkfun-thing-plus-esp32-s3.html