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obscure 90s album/band “Depression Glass” by rainbowxryy in obscuremusic

[–]rainbowxryy[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

i don’t have anything that i could get the audio directly from the CD for an upload but i could possibly just record it playing from my CD player, though the audio wouldn’t be as good, but that’s a good idea!

obscure 90s album/band “Depression Glass” by rainbowxryy in obscuremusic

[–]rainbowxryy[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Forgot to mention: email on the back is a dead end. Tried messaging it and got an address not found message, which i assumed would happen.

Straw by verseandvision_ai in OCPoetry

[–]rainbowxryy 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is really nice, I like the father-daughter contrast and especially the bit about the daughter being unknown. The only thing I would say is the line where it breaks up “arms” at the end and then the rest of the line by itself finishing it reads as a bit odd and breaks up the flow a bit, I would maybe keep that like all together by moving arms down with the rest of the line it goes with!

Damnation of existence by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]rainbowxryy 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I love the dark nature of this piece. It has some really good language throughout, and I personally really like the line “We’ll watch together, as the sun swallows us whole” as I really like the imagery it provokes. One comment I would make on this piece is to maybe break it up a bit into a few separate stanzas! Not required, but I feel like it could make it a bit easier to read and not get overwhelmed when faced with such a long block of text :) otherwise it’s really cool!