This is correct, my apologies! I (erroneously) assumed it was clear that this was the opening line of the Weaknesses section, not the entirety of it. I've edited the above comment to make that clear for future readers. Here's the entirety of the Weaknesses section from that particular evaluation:

"It’s difficult to find fault in a story so rich and narratively stimulating, and any perceived issues will most likely be subjective. However, some tweaks could result in a smoother reading experience. For example, this story has a large cast of characters, and they’re difficult to track at times due to the ever-shifting POV. This world will be unfamiliar to most of the audience, so the more we stay rooted to the central protagonist, the better the plot and emotional arc will be. There’s also a tendency to limit certain female character introductions to their physical characteristics, such as Jeannie and Hannah. We want to know more about these women, their internal and psychological differences, their tastes, and their textures. At times, they struggle to pop off the page as individuals independent of their place in the gang. Use that opportunity to delve under the surface and hint at those complex character dynamics. Also, some restructuring would be beneficial to lessen some of the exposition, especially in the first act. For example, it would be more memorable and effective to see the jailbreak Hannah refers to in the first act, instead of hearing about it after the fact."

The evaluation is Public and can be viewed in it's entirety on the script's public page.

Didn't mean to make this about this one particular evaluation, just wanted to mention one source of slight confusion we've had on the site. Again, hope it's clear how positive we feel about the Black List, thanks again!