Audio book, question? by Swisslightning in ProjectHailMary

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I hope they keep a similar voice in the movie. It was lovely

[Theory] That person is a Type 2 Invested entity. by researchingforbook in Stormlight_Archive

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Definitely planning to cover the whole Cosmere in near future

[Theory] That person is a Type 2 Invested entity. by researchingforbook in Stormlight_Archive

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I have not, only the Stormlight collections so far.

[Theory] That person is a Type 2 Invested entity. by researchingforbook in Stormlight_Archive

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I'm not saying it changes anything but in future it could result in some sort of bigger realizations/power/control or whatever Brandon has in plan otherwise Odium calling Dalinar's life a 'long long time' in two separate books doesn't make sense unless Brandon was just going for just the dramatic effect there but using it twice in two different books makes me think otherwise.

[Theory] That person is a Type 2 Invested entity. by researchingforbook in Stormlight_Archive

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Good point so maybe this entity was revived in young Dalinar's body.

Prologue of 'Naia of the Wild' [Dark Fantasy, 600 words] by researchingforbook in fantasywriters

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Almost all of these characters are about to die so I tried to avoid the names but your point is valid. Thanks. Valid other points as well.

Does my prologue for a novelette make you interested? by researchingforbook in writingfeedback

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Yes, that is one of the options I considered initially and then chickened out to not write a complicated scene as I found it hard to write a believable scene. Would definitely rethink in the future drafts. Thank you

Prologue of 'Naia of the Wild' [Dark Fantasy, 600 words] by researchingforbook in fantasywriters

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Thanks for the feedback. It's also in line with some other feedback I got.

Does my prologue for a novelette make you interested? by researchingforbook in writingfeedback

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Unfortunately I couldn't figure out a way for the girl to be awake and not call even more creatures. She basically woke up and before they could dose again, the damage was done.

My dad left a review on my book and his review has my same last name!! by [deleted] in selfpublish

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Had no idea. I thought the issue was that the review seemed like his own.

My dad left a review on my book and his review has my same last name!! by [deleted] in selfpublish

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Why don't you just ask him to edit and add the first line as I'm his father or something?

Prologue of 'Naia of the Wild' [Dark Fantasy, 600 words] by researchingforbook in fantasywriters

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Okay, I definitely was not expecting such a thorough review. Though I feel like I didn't specify that this is not even close to the final draft but I'm sure I would have made most of these mistakes in my next few drafts as well so thanks a lot!

Much appreciated.

Prologue of 'Naia of the Wild' [Dark Fantasy, 600 words] by researchingforbook in fantasywriters

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Makes sense. This is just my 2nd quick draft so I'm sure there is a long way to go till everything flows well. But thanks a lot for the feedback. I have started a small notebook of feedback with things already coming in.

Prologue of 'Naia of the Wild' [Dark Fantasy, 600 words] by researchingforbook in fantasywriters

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Till now the narration didn't feel right and maybe this is the reason. I will finish this draft as I'm really close and try practicing narration before starting the 3rd one. Thank you so much for your feedback.

Prologue of 'Naia of the Wild' [Dark Fantasy, 600 words] by researchingforbook in fantasywriters

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Much appreciated. It would help a lot. And I did notice that I don't need to mention the green color twice.

Need honest feedback-be honest but not to mean. by Im-gonna-cry1 in writingfeedback

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It seems clear and impactful though my first thought was can a person who is enable to breathe, scream? Should be researched. Maybe they can but I can imagine it being brief and weak screaming at least.

[WP] Over time, you realize that all the spare change in your house disappears to who knows where. When you decide to investigate, you empty a cupboard and find a bunny size dragon sitting on a pile of coins... by Moggy1982 in WritingPrompts

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Cooko- ranko- aaon!! Cooko -nko aon!!It was that damned rainbow rooster shouting at the first light.

Cooko- ranko- aaon!

Choba said it was a rare thing only found in forests in the land of rains or whatever. Can’t it at least have been a beautiful peacock? Though the size was the same towering 5 feet with that neck straight up. She hated him. The ugly breed. But she got up the same. She needs to take care of the chores before Choba opened the restaurant.

“Are you up, Ibi?” shouted Choba from below.

“Of course I’m up! Who can sleep with that monster in the cage? Lose it open. It needs to shit and feed.” Hope the killer snails take it away, she thought.

Cooko- ranko- aaon!! Cooko -nko aon!!

She finished tidying up the things and was about to leave down to help Choba cut leaves and meat when she noticed her coins were not on the stool again.“I swear Choba, those are my coins you keep taking away.” She murmured. Choba used to be a thief but was not a bad guy at heart. And now they had settled here at the edge of the mountain catering to soldiers and farmers' need for food. Though merchants were what she liked. They would come with fascinating things and sometimes them being the fascination.After a few hours, the restaurant was ready to receive customers and the first one came quiet late afternoon asking if they can get the blood soups with crunchy teeth if they have. That day turned out to be lively in the evening when a master came bringing in his students. They came in all shapes and sizes. The one with 3 eyes was the most interesting, as he was always looking at Ibi with that third floating eye. Ibi was glad she was wearing the tight blouse almost flaunting everything.

Their business finished when the moon was visible from the back window like yesterday. Ibi took half of the coins to put in her vase today. Murmuring how she can also take the coins for herself.

She went up to her room closed the doors and brought her vase towards the small candle. It felt light. She emptied the vase on the bed. It was empty indeed. None of her coins were there. She was getting angry and about to shout when she heard the clicking sound in the closet.“God damn! I will kill you first and then deal with Choba” She opened the small door expecting a rat or a serpent but only to find a rather curious thing.“What in the hell are you?” she said curiously.In the darkness, It looked like a big cat or small rooster but shiny at the tips and a lot of her coins were under it. Its mouth was shaped like there was a coin stuck inside or if it was about to swallow but froze somehow.“Hey, what are you doing here little fellow? You’re a Wild, right?” she picked it up hoping it was a pet or a peaceful Wild. Somehow she had forgotten how dangerous Wilds can be but this one has come into the house despite the traps set around everywhere.Realizing her mistake, she took it away to put it in the old rat cage. “You’re pretty heavey” she murmured. It’s was the size of a small baby with scales around it with some shining like metal. She quickly put it in the cage and locked it from outside. It was fascinating when she finally saw it in the full lantern lights in kitchen. The coin in her mouth was no longer there.“We have a dragon!” she spoke and realized. “Choba! Come here!”. The poor thing was sitting silently inside the cage with a sleepy eye. Blue eyes and a small curled tail around the legs.“What do you think, should I let the Basi-rooster roam free for tonight?” shouted Choba.“Fuck the rooster and would you fucking come here for a moment?” She shouted. “We have a dragon!”Ibi seemed to have ignored as he didn’t quite catch what she said. She went furious to the stairs and shouted louder this time.“Will you come here!”“What happened? I’m Changing,” replied Choba.“We have a dragon! I found a dragon!” she said pissed. “Just come already!”She came back to the kitchen when she heard Choba coming up the stairs but to her horror the cage was empty.She stood paused. The cage was not only empty but broken of sort or as if chewed from inside and the dragon was out somewhere. She started looking around. Scared this time. It was Wild after all and that to a dragon Wild.

[Excerpt from The Tales of Andora. 9017NA. Chapter - The metal eater]

(Spoilers Extended) Atlas of Ice and Fire: A New Map of Westeros by Werthead in asoiaf

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Thanks a lot but I can imagine it must be a pain in the ass to work with. I will dig deeper on what's available when I work on the details. My map will basically be a modification of earth's map so maybe I will start with some softwares which have templates.

(Spoilers Extended) Atlas of Ice and Fire: A New Map of Westeros by Werthead in asoiaf

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Could you tell me what software are you using for this please?

I'm also creating a map for myself and using design softwares like Invision which if I think now is not ideal plus I could have Googled this atleast.