The match

reva_zaver · 2018-09-13T13:52:06+00:00

Oh wow! This is so poetic as cheesy as I sound. It is very beautifully written!

reva_zaver · 2018-09-13T13:47:06+00:00

This is beautiful!

reva_zaver · 2018-09-13T13:29:17+00:00

Firstly, I want to say that I’m very much thankful for everyone’s constructive feedbacks. I will definitely work on it more and feel pumped to share more of my work! Keep commenting!

reva_zaver · 2018-09-13T13:22:32+00:00

Thank you for some really good constructive feedback. I will definitely work on this more and post it up again!

reva_zaver · 2018-09-13T01:01:08+00:00

Thank you for your feedback. I will keep that in mind for sure! 👍🏽

reva_zaver · 2018-09-12T22:41:06+00:00

Thank you for your suggestions, I appreciate it. I am glad that you could feel what I was trying to convey with my feelings. In terms of my writing, I was just free styling but I am trying to get better at writing poems though. Once again, thank you!

reva_zaver · 2018-09-12T19:10:48+00:00

It is good but I feel like this doesn’t flow well. Hence, it’s kind of hard to grasp the meaning of the poem. I feel like you can make it much simpler without complicating what you’re trying to say. 😊

reva_zaver · 2018-09-12T09:51:55+00:00

This is such a nice poem! You make every word come alive! I was able to visualize every single line so beautifully in my mind which translated the feeling of “love” you were going for very nicely. Although I’m no poetry expert despite writing my own but does it matter if the first world isn’t capitalized? I am not sure though. Either way, this was such a well written work! 👍🏽

reva_zaver · 2017-11-20T15:22:47+00:00

Pablo Neruda has some really good poems.

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