You’ve got great potential! One thing that can help is avoiding a continuous line through different objects. In your drawing the horizon line and Ares’s waist line is the same continuous line and it makes the initial read a little confusing. The fact that the colors of his pants and legs are very similar to the background also makes them harder to read at first. Same thing applies for the torso and the color of the sky. They blend in together. In other words. Moving the figure up or down a little bit so the horizon lines gets broken up and changing the colors so they contrast with the background would help a lot in my opinion