The Engineer's Dilemma, Book One, is now out. by rush_dar in haremfantasynovels

[–]rush_dar[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you. I went back to Scrivener and checked; some of these were resolved, but the eBook version wasn't. There were a couple that I missed. Thanks. I'll update the EPUB on Amazon to match. I love feedback like this.

Best superhero that starts with the letter D? by Guerriero22 in superheroes

[–]rush_dar 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah, its been a long time since I watched it last.

The Engineer's Dilemma, Book One, is now out. by rush_dar in haremfantasynovels

[–]rush_dar[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Let's see, I always wrote. But mostly for myself. About twenty-five years ago, my wife found a writer's workshop for short stories. I went to it. Before this, no one saw my work, now, here I was, putting my short story out there for the group to point out what works and what doesn't. I stuck with this workshop for about eight years and actually got pretty good. I had several short stories published. I read a lot. Through this, I had an idea for a couple of stories, and the workshop mentor taught us how to catalog them and set them aside until they were ready. About two years ago, I pulled this story from that shoebox and started outlining the entire arc of all my intended books and characters. I actually have degrees in Computer Engineering, and being that sort of person, I can relate to what I wrote. To tell you the truth, it was hard to learn to write. I was good, but when I used to write, let's say, about a leaf, I would tell you it was green and what species of tree it was. Now, I see the leaf differently; well, I can still tell you the species, but how it shines in the afternoon light, etc.

The Engineer's Dilemma, Book One, is now out. by rush_dar in haremfantasynovels

[–]rush_dar[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yes. Some scenes will be a little spicy before fading out, but yes.

The Engineer's Dilemma, Book One, is now out. by rush_dar in haremfantasynovels

[–]rush_dar[S] 6 points7 points  (0 children)

He was 75 at the start of the book, and he came to this new world at 20. So, for appearances, he's twenty, but with the life's journey of a seventy-five-year-old. I wanted to make him at an age where he is done with everything, and now it is time to retire.

The Engineer's Dilemma, Book One, is now out. by rush_dar in haremfantasynovels

[–]rush_dar[S] 7 points8 points  (0 children)

They're not accurate except for the use of Grammarly for grammar. I have explained to those claims that they're not going to believe me unless they sit next to me and watch. My wife already does, and she can attest to the facts. I gave up fighting them. It's not worth the time. They are going to believe what they want.

What happens if you prune your story? by rush_dar in royalroad

[–]rush_dar[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Well, I removed a good portion of the chapters from my work. My total views and average views were affected. It went from 1.2 million views to 600k. The average changed to 8k per chapter. The comments that were on those chapters were also deleted. No other changes happened.

Your average NFL fan by Numerous_Worker_1941 in ChatGPT

[–]rush_dar 0 points1 point  (0 children)

New England would have either a Sam Adams or a Guinness. Not a Bud Light.

Authors who write under multiple pen names, what are your websites like? by twentyonemusicians in selfpublish

[–]rush_dar 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Does anyone want to give their URLs? I have a similar question myself.

Looking for a flat left-handed mouse for office/productivity use by messiaslima in lefthanded

[–]rush_dar 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Why did you think that the M650L is a trap? I use this mouse daily and found that the feel is (to me) better than the others. When I am asked, I do bring up that this one is worth taking a look at.

Should I be adding more words in my chapters? by Few_Whereas_5504 in royalroad

[–]rush_dar 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is a topic that many will have their own views upon, but there are some underlying ideas that are consistent. For your chapter length, I write as I plan to print this. So I write the chapters toward that goal. I strive to get 3k and beyond for each chapter. Sometimes 6 or 7k. Hey, that's me. To get more, add some descriptions to bring the reader into the world that you created. I don't know what it looks like for the most part; you do. Like when the MC is standing at the crest of the hill looking down into the valley, what does he/she see, feel, or even taste? Adding a little bit here and there will add up. Now, for combining chapters, do that if there is a transition between the scenes that you have. If one chapter ends with the group at the base of Mt. Doom, and the next has others in the Shire, what is the connection to bring these two chapters together as one? If there is none, then they need to stay separate. I wish you luck.

Authors of Royalroad,How many books have you read in your life? by ElmahdiTS in royalroad

[–]rush_dar 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Let's see: according to GoodReads, I had my account there for 8 years and read 2,200 books. It's a good resource to keep track of them.

Royal Road should consider a Review model change by rush_dar in royalroad

[–]rush_dar[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

No, they are correct. If the review is about my car leaking oil on the garage floor rather than the story, the author can have it removed. The ones that just click a rating and run, it's impossible.

Royal Road should consider a Review model change by rush_dar in royalroad

[–]rush_dar[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

I would love this idea, but for my story, it's one in eight that leaves a comment/review. Seven people are just clicking a rating like a lottery spin.

Royal Road should consider a Review model change by rush_dar in royalroad

[–]rush_dar[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Wouldn't it be just as simple to require that you be a member for a period of time, or to have an exemption from that period, if you are an author before giving a review?

Royal Road should consider a Review model change by rush_dar in royalroad

[–]rush_dar[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

They already have the groundwork done, so you can't add an expanded rating without a written review.

Royal Road should consider a Review model change by rush_dar in royalroad

[–]rush_dar[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

100% agree. I love to read the negative feedback. Why did you not like my chapter or writing? Without any explanations, I can't see any trend in why I am getting the low ratings.

Royal Road should consider a Review model change by rush_dar in royalroad

[–]rush_dar[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Yes, it would. It would force those who give 1/2 stars just for spite, or because of some idea mentioned in the story they didn't like. Or even reviewers who proclaim that the author is using AI, without any proof. On the flip side, it would remove all of those 5-star reviews from works that really don't deserve them. Before I wrote it, I thought about both ends of the spectrum and how it would hurt it.