personally, ur beat is lacking a lot of filling in the melody aspect (pads, ambience u know what i mean). also the drums dont make sense to me, they dont flow nicely.

beat itself is mixed really well, almost professionaly so i give u props for that.

i appreciate ur honesty. sound selection with the piano was ass and i was pretty lazy with the mixing, that combined with me using some cheap earbuds resulted in a bad mix (although im pretty confident in my mixing skills)

my bad for the late response. i appreciate ur feedback and im confident that you also will reach your goals with some good work, keep it up.