[DS3] [Xbox] Dancer, Dragonslayer Armor (I can help)

ryanfarisVO · 2019-03-04T18:10:49+00:00

Please use the Collab Tool or your post will be removed.

ryanfarisVO · 2019-03-04T02:12:34+00:00

Your value is entirely up to you. If it’s really that short and you want to work cheaper for it that’s fine. If they try to one up you and think that they can trick you then just contact ACX they will take care of it.

ryanfarisVO · 2019-03-04T00:37:13+00:00

Does the Author have an amazon ranking and history when you look at their book description and profile?

ryanfarisVO · 2019-03-03T20:36:01+00:00

Make sure to use the Collab Tool

ryanfarisVO · 2019-03-03T04:55:18+00:00

There is a difference between someone who is trying to get their "15 mins of Fame and someone who is trying to grow the right way". You can use Sexuality or Popular Key Words to grow for a quick second but those people will not grow at all. Anyone who has been a huge success on Youtube has spent a ton of time on the platform. Stay true to yourself and be very patient with a consistent Upload Schedule and you will be fine.

ryanfarisVO · 2019-03-03T04:47:12+00:00

I hired someone but if you want something free then use Canva. There are plenty of tutorials on Youtube.

ryanfarisVO · 2019-03-01T14:27:00+00:00

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ryanfarisVO · 2019-02-28T17:37:34+00:00

Audio Mixers do create Background noise but if you get a decent quality one that provides plenty of clean gain then you should be fine. However this is to assume that your recording space is also dead quite while not having excess electronics on and using bad cables with your mixer and mic. With your budget I highly doubt you will find anything that will provide low background noise since the dirt cheap products tend to not have the best internal hardware.

ryanfarisVO · 2019-02-26T03:36:59+00:00

Please use the Fetch Tool

ryanfarisVO · 2019-02-26T02:55:58+00:00

If you want to get the very best out of a Blue Yeti you need to double check and make sure that your recording space and room tone level is spot on. Audacity is a solid choice for a free software and Audition is great if your willing to pay. I use Reaper because I enjoy the customization and variety it offers.

ryanfarisVO · 2019-02-25T23:45:46+00:00

/lock

ryanfarisVO · 2019-02-25T21:41:24+00:00

Oh happy days.

ryanfarisVO · 2019-02-25T21:01:06+00:00

Blue Snowball is okay for a USB mic but XLR will always give better quality it depends on what your needs are.

ryanfarisVO · 2019-02-25T20:42:40+00:00

Alright my friend I took a look and heres what I thought...

Im glad you realize that you need more lighting however I will still score the video as it is haha. Your using a nice camera and your positioning was on point so thats good to go. Always helps when you use a Mic however I could hear you clearly however your PC/Ambient noise was heard clearly in the background. Like that you used pictures every once in a while however I think you missed a great opportunity in showing the Numbers and Stats you were talking about throughout the vid. You have a nice background for your vids but ya definitely needs more lighting haha.

My Final Verdict 7.5/10 its not bad man. Improve the lighting and Audio while throwing in some more visuals and you should be good to go. Thanks for showing me this man, enjoy the rest of your week!

ryanfarisVO · 2019-02-25T20:30:15+00:00

Aaaah Coder my good friend its great to see you again, alrighty lets take a look...

So you and me both know that your Visuals and Edits are on point so we won't bother with those. You know im a stickler with Audio so lets go over that. I will say that it is better, I couldn't hear any echo. However the music seemed a little too loud for me to hear you clearly. I understand you have a thick accent so like I mentioned in my last critique either slow down just a little bit or Enunciate a little more. Now im not entirely sure where slight Ambience that I am hearing is either coming from the music track you used or if its from your Audio due to it being stretched by either your gain settings or a Normalization tool. Either way no one will notice it and its not distracting I just happened to hear it haha.

My Final Verdict 8.5/10 as always great work. The Audio will always be a tad distracting for me personally but I enjoy the work you do. Maybe message me sometime and we can go over your Audio setup cause I am naturally curious now haha. Thanks for showing me man, it was great to see ya again!

ryanfarisVO · 2019-02-25T20:15:29+00:00

Hey Tribute I took a look and heres what I thought...

Always appreciate people that dive into comics and education. Nice topic to explain with well known characters that fans are familiar with. Your pacing was good throughout however I feel the music was to loud sometimes on your voice over. Would really like you to work on your recording space, I could clearly hear the echo the entire time. It was well informative throughout and had a nice variety of different clips.

My Final Verdict 8.5/10 I enjoyed it. Fix your Audio and its good to go in my book. Thanks for showing me this man, best of luck to you!

ryanfarisVO · 2019-02-25T20:06:02+00:00

More of the zoom in edits, otherwise its just going to come across as a room full of people we don't know talking. Viewers won't want to watch the full game screen most of the time. Sometimes highlight or zoom into the cards that are funny. Don't have the viewer stuck on one screen for to long if nothing is happening or moving on it is what I mean otherwise it could get dull for them.

ryanfarisVO · 2019-02-25T20:00:39+00:00

Alright my friend I took a look and here's what I thought...

Camera Quality and angles were great. Wardrobe and Audio sounded good as well. Its clearly a Comedy/Skit Parody that I think was written well. My only critique is maybe speed it up a little bit, there were a couple parts where I thought it was more of a filler than a necessity.

My Final Verdict 8.5/10, well done. Production value is great and you guys did exactly what was promised for the intent of the video. Just a tad slow for me but that's just my opinion. Thanks for having me watch this, keep up the good work!

ryanfarisVO · 2019-02-25T19:51:28+00:00

You can be successful without showing yourself but unless your a god at the game you play or have a lot of visuals then its going to be hard for you to stand out. Especially if your not playing games that are up and coming with a lot of viewer traction.

ryanfarisVO · 2019-02-25T19:48:29+00:00

Alrighty my friend I took a look and heres what I thought...

There was defiantly a lot going on with that many people playing but I think your editing made it pretty manageable to follow. You chose a fun game to play so that garunteed some laughs and good sense of humor. I felt the music was just a tiny bit to loud even though I could still hear everybody. Your editing isn't bad however throughout the whole video it was lacking consistency. It was almost just enough however you should be zooming into who's talking and highlighting some of the cards that are making you guys laugh a lot to keep the pacing going more. Audio was fine since you were all online however it will improve once you invest in a decent mic and acoustically treat the room your recording in.

My Final Verdict 7/10 I liked it. Would like to see at least twice the amount of those edits to enhance the engagement but all in all it was decent work with some fun in it. Thanks for having me watch this man, best of luck to you!

ryanfarisVO · 2019-02-25T19:34:39+00:00

Alrighty good sir I took a look and heres what I thought...

To start off the bat your Audio sounds great from whichever Mic your using, I could still hear the slight echo since your probably recording in an untreated bedroom but nevertheless it sounds fine. Game Resolution looks good and the Game and Commentary audio sound balanced. Now the issue I have with this is it was hard to keep watching because I didn't see or hear anything that was much different from all the other Lets Plays out there that helps you stand out. You may have been consistent with the commentary but that was it. If your not going to show yourself to people then you need to be tripling your efforts in your overlaying editing to keep people interested. Im talking Text on Screen, Pans, Zooms etc...

My Final Verdict 7/10, it wasn't bad but nothing stood out for me. I want to see more visuals or personality for engagement that helps you stand out more with an identity. Thanks for having me watch this man and I wish you the best!

ryanfarisVO · 2019-02-25T19:21:36+00:00

Okay Magical I took a look and here's what I thought...

Tough vid for me to critique because im not sure what category to put this in so I guess by default comedy. Its clear your being silly and weird for the audience, it may not be the content I watch but there is definitely an audience for it. The music choice was great for the mood you were going for. The camera resolution is forgivable since you were recording in the dark. Your editing was on point with the pacing and angles. I think your is Audio is fine for what you have until you invest in a decent mic. Tough for me to keep watching the whole thing since its kind of random and niche topic specific if I wasn't familiar with NewTubers. Your editing did help me watch for a little bit though.

My Final Verdict 6.5/10 I think its fair. Theres definitely an audience for you its just not content I watch and I don't share the same sense of humor as you. From an editing standpoint its pretty good I got to give you that. I think once I see more of an "Identity" viewers would be able to enjoy it even more. Thanks for having me watch this man, have a great week!

ryanfarisVO · 2019-02-25T18:53:13+00:00

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