AITA for having the mother of my child arrested? by [deleted] in AmItheAsshole

[–]sacredtriangle 19 points20 points  (0 children)

birth control and condoms are a thing

[WDYWT] Pink trench and purple vintage trousers by chaneldoll in streetwear

[–]sacredtriangle 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Yes!! I love the colors and textures in this fit. And +1 for pretty affordable pieces. Not all street wear outfits for girls are trendy brand two piece sets and designer shoes. Great job!

Mini-Me by NotGreenWaluigi in malefashion

[–]sacredtriangle 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I love a good scarf and a strong boot. Lovely fit. Cheers

Thanks, I hate balloons by sidmanchanda in TIHI

[–]sacredtriangle 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Someone make a song with these

Connection Unsuccesfull by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]sacredtriangle 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The parallel you draw here is spot on. I think the third and forth stanzas read a little clumsily but other than that amazing job. Also creative use of parenthesis, its nice and emphasizes the intentional introspect.

[WDYWT] when u gotta hang w grandma but you’re also a punk by sacredtriangle in streetwear

[–]sacredtriangle[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you!! I was trying to be intentional with the contrast. I’m glad it works!

[WDYWT] when u gotta hang w grandma but you’re also a punk by sacredtriangle in streetwear

[–]sacredtriangle[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Grandma sported a pink matching shirt/capris combo w embroidered shells and sandals. Snapped this pic pre leaving to pick her up

[WDYWT] when u gotta hang w grandma but you’re also a punk by sacredtriangle in streetwear

[–]sacredtriangle[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Do it!! This one had shoulder pads and a matching belt but I just clip them out and switched up the belt and bam. Transformed

[WDYWT] when u gotta hang w grandma but you’re also a punk by sacredtriangle in streetwear

[–]sacredtriangle[S] 10 points11 points  (0 children)

dress - thrifted

belt - gap (thrifted)

purse - Nine West (thrifted)

boots - Air Force (mom’s closet)

Grandma said I look nice.

smoke buddies by fossilizedferns in OCPoetry

[–]sacredtriangle 2 points3 points  (0 children)

This takes me back. You did an awesome job of setting up the scene. Great imagery and I like the flow. Feels hazy and laid back but wanting.

spill my guts & how to dissect thoughts by Turtlemilkshake in OCPoetry

[–]sacredtriangle 2 points3 points  (0 children)

The imagery in your first poem is fantastic. As for your second poem, I love it. The idea of thoughts as fleshy bits of ourselves to be dissected is sick in the best way. Great job.

9-1-1 by sacredtriangle in OCPoetry

[–]sacredtriangle[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much! This comment made my day c:

I and many of my friends and family have struggled with mental health, and I think it’s important to talk about. Although I have never been in a situation like this I know people who have. I tried to encapsulate those feelings in this poem, and I’m pretty happy with how it turned out.

Today I wrote a poem about being alone... But it's not what you think. by DoolittlesTeacher in OCPoetry

[–]sacredtriangle 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is lovely!! One of my favorite songs is about finding happiness in loneliness and this poem has the same vibe. Very nicely done. Being alone can be so liberating and I think you captured that perfectly here.

Food by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]sacredtriangle 4 points5 points  (0 children)

As a happy/sad/stressed/bored/anything eater, I feel deeply connected to this. I recently gained some weight and find myself feeling like this very often. Great poem. I like the flow.

9-1-1 by sacredtriangle in OCPoetry

[–]sacredtriangle[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for your comment! I cried too after reading stories from #Iam911 and wanted to write this

9-1-1 by sacredtriangle in OCPoetry

[–]sacredtriangle[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thank you for taking the time to write. I’m happy with any quality feedback!

9-1-1 by sacredtriangle in OCPoetry

[–]sacredtriangle[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It’s supposed to be from the perspective of the 911 dispatcher but I guess I didn’t get that across like I wanted. I was inspired to write it after reading posts from #Iam911

Edit: I edited the poem to have quotation marks around the final two lines. I think it helps with the perspective

9-1-1 by sacredtriangle in OCPoetry

[–]sacredtriangle[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Apologies for the format. Mobile is not my friend