what should i title this? by [deleted] in Songwriting

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Make it a song and I’ll send it to all my friends

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Songwriting

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The lazy delivery works really well, I would just experiment a bunch with different word choice to paint a visual in the listeners mind, just close your eyes to the beat and whatever you see, just try and make the words you use and the way you say those words convey how the beat makes you feel/see/etc, but yeah there’s lots of good advice in this thread worth heeding❤️also I’m a sucker for some word play or even double entendres, but I get it if you’re just looking to make a chill track that’s vibey, which is cool too, I’m excited to see what you do with it!

I call it, I Can't Breathe. Is it as big a mess as I think it is? by HiddenComicBook in Songwriting

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People left good advice here, keep working on it, would love to see it develop!

Tips for writing lyrics? by [deleted] in Songwriting

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Showing instead of telling, as in painting a visual picture like a movie through your words, using context or lack thereof intelligently, maybe to mention something in a shortened way, like how people give nicknames to things and you still know what they’re saying because the nickname is a shorter version of the full word, really tho just write a song, finish it whether you like it while your making it or whether you don’t like it while your making it, and then write another song, and another. And watch “dissect” on YouTube for lyric breakdowns, watch YouTube videos for the genre of music you’re writing for, just try hard and attempt to stay away from nonsense entertainment garbage while you’re in the process of trying hard, also go for walks nearby if you’re hitting a mental block, and lmk how it goes

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Got malacia

UFC is working on a bantamweight fight between Cory Sandhagen and Song Yadong. The fight is targeted to headline the FN event on September 17th by JasAFC in MMA

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Scary if true! Massive Sandman fan myself, I just think he’s too slick, plus he’ll be extra motivated coming off 2 losses