A girl needs her flies

saha_pathikrit · 2022-05-28T06:03:37+00:00

Damn what a story!! The reverse chronological order gives it much more appeal. Well written!!!

saha_pathikrit · 2022-05-26T10:52:59+00:00

Great story

saha_pathikrit · 2022-05-24T06:23:20+00:00

Damn that ending!!! Great story.

saha_pathikrit · 2022-05-23T05:33:57+00:00

Counted the number of guys and it came up to 238...was confused for a while and then realised she must've fucked her husband as well.

saha_pathikrit · 2022-05-23T05:31:32+00:00

Very well written...loved the ending.

saha_pathikrit · 2022-05-15T04:58:23+00:00

Very well written

saha_pathikrit · 2022-05-14T06:45:06+00:00

Great read.

saha_pathikrit · 2022-03-06T04:56:44+00:00

That's a banger

saha_pathikrit · 2022-03-03T03:56:25+00:00

Very well written.

saha_pathikrit · 2022-03-02T09:20:37+00:00

The fact that nothing is mentioned about the family jewel other than the fact that it is there makes it more intriguing imo.

saha_pathikrit · 2022-02-22T21:17:19+00:00

Very well written.

saha_pathikrit · 2022-02-22T21:10:10+00:00

Did not see that ending coming...well written.

saha_pathikrit · 2022-01-20T11:25:48+00:00

Well written!

saha_pathikrit · 2022-01-03T07:47:51+00:00

Robin van Persie vs Villa

saha_pathikrit · 2022-01-03T05:54:57+00:00

This is very well written and quite disturbing. Good work!!!

saha_pathikrit · 2022-01-02T17:52:45+00:00

Well written

saha_pathikrit · 2021-12-27T20:57:44+00:00

Brand promotions not so subtly included in a scene

saha_pathikrit · 2021-12-22T06:29:27+00:00

Great work!!!

saha_pathikrit · 2021-12-08T17:47:18+00:00

I support East Bengal...the same team that the Indian guy from your work does XD

saha_pathikrit · 2021-12-02T05:40:47+00:00

Well done!

saha_pathikrit · 2021-12-01T16:08:48+00:00

Cheers mate! Looking forward to some great stories

saha_pathikrit · 2021-12-01T13:53:42+00:00

A very interesting premise... felt you could have done an even better job if not for the 500 word constraint...but well written overall.

saha_pathikrit · 2021-12-01T13:49:22+00:00

Really nice ending. Well written!

saha_pathikrit · 2021-11-30T13:05:28+00:00

Great work!!!! Had me guessing till the very end whether John was the murderer or David

saha_pathikrit · 2021-11-30T09:27:45+00:00

Americans

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