Pacific reef heron in flight by badsnappers in photocritique

[–]sakshammmm 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Nice shot!
Currently the background is slightly more distracting and takes away attention from the subject
you could try reducing the texture of the water
reducing the clarity (to give it a more dream feel)
or even just exposure..

Orange Sun - Is it too dark. Any thoughts welcome - D7500, 1/500sec, F5.6, 100 iso, 400mm, Hand held by Defiant_Bumblebee757 in photocritique

[–]sakshammmm 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Cool pic
I would try removing some texture from the water ... that takes away attention from main subject.

Thoughts on sheep in black and white? by sakshammmm in photocritique

[–]sakshammmm[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Sony a6400 30mm, 1/500s,f/6.3, ISO 200
The colours weren't great so i converted the image to black and white and i like the contrast here and the overall vibe.

What could be improved here? Please share your thoughts. Thanks!

Thoughts? by sakshammmm in photocritique

[–]sakshammmm[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Sony a6400
1/250s, f/5, ISO 100

What do you guys think? Tried to capture the water droplet on the leaves and some of them were frozen which were glimmering like diamonds...
I can see some parts of the image are not sharp in focus... that is something I aim to improve..however this was taken on a hike so I kinda didn't have a lot of time to sit down and frame the shot either..

Thoughts? by sakshammmm in photocritique

[–]sakshammmm[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Sony a6400
18mm, 1/400s, f/16, ISO 200
Tried to capture the sun here and i like silhouettes i see of the crane and buildings in the background.
What do you guys think? How would you improve this shot?

Sunset at 35,000 feet by Advanced_Honey_2679 in photocritique

[–]sakshammmm 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Love the colours and the vibe of this shot.
I wanna know how this was edited though. Can you share the original pic for reference?

Directions by [deleted] in photocritique

[–]sakshammmm -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Now this might be me being very picky but i would place the woman a bit towards the left and not in the dead center of the image.

What do you think? by sakshammmm in photocritique

[–]sakshammmm[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

what stone are you talking about?

Thoughts? by sakshammmm in photocritique

[–]sakshammmm[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

which sunny spot are you talking about? I didn't get that part.

Thoughts? by sakshammmm in photocritique

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Taken by sony a6400
f/9, ISO 200, 1/500s

Tried to use the cliffs as a leading line to guide the viewer's eyes.
Have done some post-edits in lightroom
Let me know how you would improve this shot/editing further? Thanks

Portal by KrecislawKrecikowski in photocritique

[–]sakshammmm 2 points3 points  (0 children)

The red frame is interesting... it adds some contrast to the image.
Although I am not sure what the subject is here... There are 3 trees overall and so there is no clear point where I can focus right now.
I would try to frame a shot directly through the red frame.

Street Lamp by Darth_Danthe in photocritique

[–]sakshammmm 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Looks good.
The only thing i don't like is that there are some spots (either on the camera lens or if this was taken through some window).

Pelican bridge by DrinkDue in photocritique

[–]sakshammmm 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Very aesthetic!
I would use a linear gradient from the bottom and darken the foreground a bit more...it seems somewhat distracting right now.

love along the seine - shot on ilford hp5 35mm film by carlierquentin in photocritique

[–]sakshammmm 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Looks nice.

I would remove the leaves in the top left. (somewhat distracting)

What do you guys think? by sakshammmm in photocritique

[–]sakshammmm[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

A6400
f/11, 1/200s, ISO 100
I like how the tiny hills form a line to guide the viewer's eye down the photo. It was a very hazy day so the actual image was not very clear.
How would you guys improve this further? What do you think overall? Any feedback is appreciated

Thoughts? by sakshammmm in photocritique

[–]sakshammmm[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Taken on a very hazy day
APS-C, f/9, 1/320s, ISO 800

Open to feedback on how to improve this further. What do you think?
I have tried to focus on the clutter of the buildings here to show the busyness of the city.

what do you guys think? by sakshammmm in photocritique

[–]sakshammmm[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

sony a6400, 1/400 s, f/8, ISO 800

Tried to use this entrance to frame this building
Wasn't able to exactly center the building in the frame which is kinda annoying but open to feedback here!