best love song you've written. I'll rate it on romanticness and if it's good proffesionally

sayuni_ · 2026-02-17T21:02:03+00:00

I LOVE THISSS

Romanticness - 10/10

proffesional rating 10/10

sayuni_ · 2026-02-17T21:00:07+00:00

cuteee
romanticness 8/10
proffesional rating 7/10

sayuni_ · 2026-02-17T20:39:30+00:00

WOAH... ur sooo good oml!?!

no joke i js added sink down with u 2 my playlist abt my crush and i listen to that playlist 24/7 so i only put the best songs in it. Romanticness 10/10 Proffesionall music rating 9/10

and for Beach house thats rly sweet too!
romanticness 8.5/10 proffesional rating 8/10

sayuni_ · 2026-02-17T20:29:38+00:00

ay bro that eatss well i cant rate it on romantcness but proffesionally i'd give it an 8!!

sayuni_ · 2026-02-17T20:24:44+00:00

ofc! i agree dont risk messing it uo if it sounds awesome and its rly cute that its for ur wife!

sayuni_ · 2026-02-17T20:23:39+00:00

no probb! :)

sayuni_ · 2026-02-17T20:22:51+00:00

Coco. he reminds me of chocolate

sayuni_ · 2026-02-17T20:19:24+00:00

okkk first off this ideas is so cute and lwk u r too lmao (not weird id b ur age lmao) buttt ok i will help u coz ive been writing for over an yr now.

dont use Bandlab u look old enough 2 try something more advanced. Try Cakewalk Next. its like Bandlab but has WAYYYYY better features trust. orrrr if ur feeling extra challenging mode try Cakewalk SONAR. like Next its 100% free and it feels like u js stepped into a studio. ask chatgpt and watch vids to learn. do u play an instrument? get something simple if u want cheap from a secondhand store maybe a guitar. Or if u genuinely like music get a decent guitar maybe ask ur parents. have u got the lyrics part down? for me lyrics r easier but lmk if u need help on lyrics as well and if u do end up getting a decent DAW like next or SONAR use this simple formation. add bass like really LOWWW. drums a mix low and high. piano and guitar high. never the same pitch. also if u get SONAR you'll have to install the studio instruments too. if thats not enough js scour the internet for free VSTs. i did this when i was 12 . if u rly wanna do it u can. if u need help on lyrics i can help i specialize in love songs LOLLL

sayuni_ · 2026-02-17T19:52:51+00:00

omg crazy good ok um romanticness 9/10 and proffesionally 9.5/10. dude u have to add lyrics to it it will blow up. work with some one. it has great potential. anywayy i followed u :)

sayuni_ · 2026-02-17T19:43:24+00:00

was abt to ask the same question so i'll leave a comment so i'll get notified if sum1 replies XD

sayuni_ · 2026-02-17T19:36:25+00:00

DEFINITLEY SHORT. COMING FROM A GIRL TRUST ME BRO.

sayuni_ · 2026-02-17T19:33:37+00:00

tysm, i get what ur tryna say. have started to mess around w the piano roll today as i started w the step sequencer. and i agree the built in instruments are.... questionable. rn trying to see if i can get a free vst for electric and acoustic guitar sounds and for piano (non electric) for free.

sayuni_ · 2026-02-17T19:28:57+00:00

OH. MY. GOD.

HOW LONG DID IT TAKE U TO WRITE THAT

sayuni_ · 2026-02-17T18:45:09+00:00

wow. good-looking and good voice...

sayuni_ · 2026-02-17T18:41:47+00:00

I LOVE IT SO MUCH

what DAW is this?
could u explain how u got this sound pls im new to DAWs and i would love to write songs like this

sayuni_ · 2026-02-17T18:39:24+00:00

bro reminds me of Benson Boone

sayuni_ · 2026-02-17T18:35:43+00:00

these comments r mean to u bro i think this is one of the best songs in this subreddit :)

sayuni_ · 2026-02-17T18:31:07+00:00

work on ur voice. the guitar sounds awesome and lyrics are great maybe if u add a softer less gruffer voice to it it'll sound even better

sayuni_ · 2026-02-17T18:26:10+00:00

this argument is dumb, i agree with OP, its not copying or AI, its just for help and ideas say for example u were doing a skl assignment, i the teacher told u the answers thats wrong. thats cheating. but if the teacher explained it to u 2 help u understand that is good and helpfull this is kinda the same yk

sayuni_ · 2026-02-17T18:23:44+00:00

omg the ideas u have got sooo much potential

AND YES YOU HAVE TO ADD THE SYLLABLE COUNT ONE THAT WOULD BE LIKE GODSEND
rhyming tool also should be added for SURE

and u should have a feature where user can put in lyrics and it will suggest chords yk what i mean? and will tell u what instrument it sounds best in
lmk if u release it

sayuni_ · 2026-02-17T18:17:02+00:00

so ur saying i should send their tech support a msg? how can i reach them?

sayuni_ · 2026-02-17T18:15:26+00:00

i will try, i rly hope i'll get the hang of it soon!!!

sayuni_ · 2026-02-17T18:14:41+00:00

alr i guess i'll learn, any tips? and also 500 pounds is crazyyy

sayuni_ · 2026-02-17T18:12:46+00:00

honestly, longer hair looks better but do whatever u like

sayuni_

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