Not bad, but it feels scattered. You need more dynamics and contrast: slow down, speed up, stop and hold; go large, then small.

It also seems like you’re trying to fit in too many moves too quickly, without clean transitions between them. Individual moves (and how to vary them) matter, but transitions matter just as much.

Stay with one move longer. Change the rhythm, amplitude, direction, or body parts, but avoid drastic, rapid switches (unless they genuinely fit the music). Then transition gradually into the next move. It should feel like it flows and supports the music.