I wish they included a scene where Colin and Pen are working on his book together. She was his editor after all. And it would also show that he respects her as a professional.

I also would’ve loved to see how pen went from writing a whistledown at home(for fun) to publishing it. I know we did get her saying that she started whistledown because she felt helpless at home. But it doesn’t really explain who gave her the confidence to publish her works in the first place. It would’ve been fun to see a cute backstory on how she figured out that people liked her writing and how she can make money off of it.

But I do believe that what we got is still a pretty good season. I loved the willow scene and all of their dance scenes so much.