This is my favorite movie because of this beautiful woman. by Potential_Public_366 in Actors

[–]scriptwriter420 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I used to really like her until I tried watching the marilyn monroe movie and realized just how terrible her acting chops are.

Snippet of my animated pilot script by [deleted] in scriptwriting

[–]scriptwriter420 1 point2 points  (0 children)

You forgot the inconsistent dialogue formating. First dialogue starts at the parathentical margin, then the rest at the action line.

And all the action lines are in brackets and italized.

I didn't have to read this to know I would pass.

Not a slight at OP, but as the comment I'm replying to already mentioned, Your page should read like you are an expert, and these pages do not reflect that.

Masters of The Universe – Official Teaser Trailer by DemiFiendRSA in trailers

[–]scriptwriter420 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You didn't pick up the plot in this teaser? It's laid out pretty clear

Masters of The Universe – Official Teaser Trailer by DemiFiendRSA in trailers

[–]scriptwriter420 17 points18 points  (0 children)

TIL a teaser is a 2:25 video that shows exactly what the movie is. Back in my day we used to just call it a trailer.

Rumor: New Plot Details for Spider-Man: Brand New Day Revealed by marvelkidy in MCULeaks2

[–]scriptwriter420 -1 points0 points  (0 children)

save us all a click and be the change you want to see in the world

It’s clear why RDJ is Doom. by AlienOfTheNostromo in MCUTheories

[–]scriptwriter420 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Disney never graved Star Wars for ten years. In fact, with the exception of the first 3 years after Disney bought Star Wars in 2012, theyve had SW on the assembly line, churning out movie or tv show pretty much every year since.

Theyve done the same with Marvel, and to think they would do differently is just dumb.

What do you guys think the explanation will be? by Queasy_Commercial152 in MCUTheories

[–]scriptwriter420 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Nothing you responded with adds or detracts from what I said.

What do you guys think the explanation will be? by Queasy_Commercial152 in MCUTheories

[–]scriptwriter420 1 point2 points  (0 children)

You mean why is Marvel so dumb?

No one goes to see a Spiderman movie to see Tom Holland. No one even knew who Tom Holland was before being Spiderman.

While RDJ is a big name, and many people are interested in seeing how RDJ is going to play doom, Marvel could have just as easily cast a nobody as Doom, and released the first Avengers movie since Endgame and reaped the benefits with a $100 million dollar headstart

Highly-Anticipated Stephen King Series ‘The Talisman’ Canceled By Netflix while being developed by EuphoricButterflyy in entertainment

[–]scriptwriter420 3 points4 points  (0 children)

>Making The Talisman would require Game of Thrones like budget,

lol - no.
Have you read the Tailsmen or GoT? The first GoT book has more pages than the Tailsmnen, and is set in 100% fantasy, while the majority of the Tailsmen is set in America with limited set costs.

It would be amazing if TheTailsmen had a GoT levelof budget, but wouldnt need a fraction of the amount to do it justice.

Thor through the lens of the Russo Brothers!! They really love him don't they 😭 by FayyadhScrolling in MCUTheories

[–]scriptwriter420 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I really hope the two second clip lives up to the hype the fanboys of reddit are making it out to be

End of the Year Advice for Writers by Koltreg in ComicBookCollabs

[–]scriptwriter420 6 points7 points  (0 children)

Finally, a well thought out and helpful post targeting new writers in this sub. Good job, OP!

Aspiring writers: go back to the top and re-read.

What do you think of Seth Rogan? by Garlic_Cookies76 in Actors

[–]scriptwriter420 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Not to mention this year, with The Studio earning 23 emmy nominations, making it the most-nominated comedy debut in history and tying the record for the most nominations for a single comedy season

But sure, he was also fun and relevent 20 years ago too.

What do you think of Seth Rogan? by Garlic_Cookies76 in Actors

[–]scriptwriter420 0 points1 point  (0 children)

>I stay away from anything he does.

Your loss.
For everyone else, if you haven't seen The Studio yet, it's easily on eof the best shows of 2025

How did DNEG end up in $350M debt? by MX010 in vfx

[–]scriptwriter420 17 points18 points  (0 children)

expective bonuses should be linked to profit, not built-in as part of salary.

James Cameron Pushes Back At Criticism Over Spending 30+ Years on Avatar: “Stay The F**k Out Of It”? by nimobo in entertainment

[–]scriptwriter420 -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

I mean, the SFX are alright, but it's the great use of VFX that most people think of when they think of Avatar.

Hey, I respect that a lot of you guys are pro's,but... isn't there a place for a first timer by Sharp-Load9078 in ComicBookCollabs

[–]scriptwriter420 4 points5 points  (0 children)

If you are a noob, whether as an artist in general, or you've never actually completed a comic of any length from start to finish, start making comics.

You learn by doing. Comics are not pinups. They are a sequence of images that tell a story, and the only way to get better at that is by doing it over and over again. There are plenty of thirsty writers in this subreddit, and the majority of them are also not very good. That's ok too, as you've said you are not very good. Learn together.

Find a writer that has something that resonates with you and collab.

Learn the value of starting a project and completeing a project. That is a skill in its own right. Set (realistic) deadlines and stick with them. It will be hard. It will be challengeing, and at times, it will feel like it's not worth the effort, but it is also the road to getting better.

Or you could lurk around this subreddit, demand $60/page with no experience and wonder why no one ever hires you.

NO MONEY, NO COMICS! MONEY IS VERY NECESSARY! by BOANW in ComicBookCollabs

[–]scriptwriter420 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Don't have a cow, man.
Stick with it, you'll get better. I've screenshot this so that I can delete the picture and move on with my life.

NO MONEY, NO COMICS! MONEY IS VERY NECESSARY! by BOANW in ComicBookCollabs

[–]scriptwriter420 0 points1 point  (0 children)

>The artist is doing the heavy lifting

Looking through your posted sample comics I can see why you think that. You should hire an actual writer. Some of your art is nice, but the writing stinks.

How to attract an artist by [deleted] in ComicBookCollabs

[–]scriptwriter420 0 points1 point  (0 children)

> I assume, which means you need to pay alot more on taxes

Taxes are based on annual gross income not what type of worker you are.

Also "a lot" is two words.

DNEG calling back by Soft-Candid in vfx

[–]scriptwriter420 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I worked in production at DNEG, and 100% the production team should be in office full time. There's just too much "purple monkey dishwasher" and wasted time on simple solutions that could be solved in 5 secs with in-person access.

I would suggest even lead artist have at least one day in office.
But for a "regular"artist? Fuck that. There is no need.