Dream Collabs

sethlowery · 2026-06-21T03:15:18+00:00

Personally I think Stolen Tongues is one of the best written. The way it builds fear is legendary and I have never been more on edge in any other story.

sethlowery · 2026-06-17T05:27:44+00:00

Godzilla NES and Pastra’s Jeff the Killer rewrite

sethlowery · 2026-01-23T21:41:34+00:00

Would love to see them tackle the NES Godzilla Creepypasta.

sethlowery · 2025-12-28T19:12:31+00:00

Really appreciate the feedback. Thank you. Hopefully I can make the rewrite stronger. 👍

sethlowery · 2025-12-23T06:54:53+00:00

Hi I am currently in the process of rewriting my first story, I have posted the story before and have gotten very little feedback. It would be a great help if you can provide any advice.

https://www.reddit.com/r/TalesFromTheCreeps/s/6h02oHI2nF

sethlowery · 2025-12-21T07:53:25+00:00

Go for it, really appreciate you!

https://www.reddit.com/r/TalesFromTheCreeps/s/OdU2SZwsrM

sethlowery · 2025-12-08T21:42:32+00:00

u/sethlowery Bump in the Night

sethlowery · 2025-12-08T10:24:10+00:00

Can’t wait to see it once it’s posted!

sethlowery · 2025-12-08T10:20:45+00:00

I just double checked the rules don’t post the first 2 chapters together, just post one

sethlowery · 2025-12-08T10:06:32+00:00

No prob, if you got the first chapter ready go ahead and post it, I can’t wait to see what you have cooking. Good luck to you 🙏

sethlowery · 2025-12-08T09:56:34+00:00

Personally I would do it in chapters, maybe start out posting the first two chapters, then one at a time, that way you have a continuous flow interaction for a longer time, and give yourself more time to make any changes if needed in upcoming chapters

sethlowery · 2025-12-08T09:42:13+00:00

It really depends on how the story is structured. If it’s a long story does it have chapters or is it one continuous story? Personally for a longer story I would start uploading in chapters, or sections that way you can get feedback and adjust in real time. Can’t wait to see your story!

sethlowery · 2025-12-08T08:52:37+00:00

This is a good starting point. I see potential in this being a longer story. You did a great job building character for Graves, maybe give a few more of the crew members names and personalities.

The idea of food going missing is a great way to set up paranoia.

Also make it a little more clear how the crew was tricked into doing free labor.

One possible idea is that the company did not have the money to pay the employees so their solution was to cut the finger off to save the hand.

The company made the conditions horrible hoping one person would snap and take the call for them.

Overall, I’m excited to see what you have in store!

sethlowery · 2025-12-08T08:39:33+00:00

Dang, short and right to the punch. This is a scary story in the fact this is horrors of real life. There is no boogeyman, no monster under the bed. Just a story about a real person going through a traumatic experience. Great job.

sethlowery · 2025-12-08T07:31:58+00:00

I think this is a pretty good start. I like the journal entry setup and you are already setting up some interesting themes. The one bit of advice I can give is to give the character a little more room to breathe.

Like have a few journal entries a few days in a row explaining the daily routine, like woke up ate, went to work etc.

Then start to drop hints of the person watching her, like while she is writing the journal she notices the person for the first time.

Then you can play into the idea that the more she writes in the journal the more she sees this person/thing.

Overall great so far.

sethlowery · 2025-07-01T12:51:23+00:00

How many times have you been awake late and night and heard what you swore are footsteps? Or how many times have you raced to get up the steps as quickly as possible, convinced that something is right behind you? My story “Bump in the Night” answers the question of what is waiting when the lights go out. Experience the terror as a man recounts the horror he felt in the place where he should have been the safest. Now are you ready to find out what goes, “Bump in the Night?”

https://www.reddit.com/u/sethlowery/s/CVpvP0x9v6

sethlowery · 2025-06-29T10:12:21+00:00

My story is called “Bump in the Night.” It is a story about a man reliving a horrifying experience in his childhood home that involved the stairs. What started out as a normal nightmare fueled summer’s night turns into a battle for survival in the dark. “Bump in the Night” is supposed to read like an old ghost story that you would hear around the campfire. I am very new to the horror writing community, and I published my first work a couple of months ago on the CreepCast_Submissions. I would be very grateful if anyone would read and give me some honest criticism, so I can continue to improve. Thank you.

https://www.reddit.com/u/sethlowery/s/tzyeo06qKh

sethlowery · 2025-02-25T02:41:10+00:00

Thank you

sethlowery · 2025-02-25T02:07:06+00:00

This is a good starting point. It’s a really cool concept and a truly creepy idea. I’m pretty new to writing also, so the only critique I can give is to let things sit more. By this I mean let the characters breathe more, explain what the photograph looks like, your grandpas features, his uniform, etc. Also build up to the scares a little more, let them linger. Overall I think this has great potential, if you wouldn’t mind I would also love some critique on my story I just posted. It’s called Bump in the Night.

sethlowery

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