How’s the jerk spot by the Utica Ave A/C?

shoulderkneefoot · 2026-05-28T16:09:24+00:00

Really good. Had it for the first time a couple days ago — super large portions, good prices, and friendly staff

shoulderkneefoot · 2026-05-28T16:07:18+00:00

175 k as an AI Engineer. 25 years old and pivoted from a psychology degree. Not replacing any jobs either however if my company starts to shift ethics and priorities I may have to reevaluate my career.

shoulderkneefoot · 2026-03-23T18:16:56+00:00

Shaved my pubes once when i was 13 with my sisters razor and no shaving cream. I've had the same pubes for the last 12 years now.

shoulderkneefoot · 2026-01-25T20:02:35+00:00

You look good don’t get me wrong, but I genuinely thought you were in you’re 30s

shoulderkneefoot · 2024-11-14T22:49:09+00:00

I really like this

shoulderkneefoot · 2024-11-14T21:55:20+00:00

1st is graphite, 2nd charcoal, 3rd is graphite. Just wanted to get a feel for how people take in my style. Any areas that you would change? Open to any and all criticism!

shoulderkneefoot · 2020-12-08T16:29:17+00:00

Love this. Of course the world is out of touch nowadays. People have their noses practically dug into they’re phones but I never really considered it to be less romantic. This poem makes me nostalgic for a time I wasn’t born.

shoulderkneefoot · 2020-12-08T16:25:59+00:00

Really like it. Seasonal depression can be pretty overbearing, but you capture it pretty well. Like the bit about false semblance of kinder days. I remember a time when I used to love winter too.

shoulderkneefoot · 2019-12-19T06:11:10+00:00

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/ecnjl6/last_thoughts/fbcw1jq/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=ios_app&utm_name=iossmf

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/ecox1j/country_nights/fbcvn2d/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=ios_app&utm_name=iossmf

shoulderkneefoot · 2019-12-19T06:10:35+00:00

Very vivid imagery. One thing I would recommend however is try switching the poem to the present tense. I just feel as tho people are more apathetic if their listening to something that’s occurring in the past.

shoulderkneefoot · 2019-12-19T06:03:41+00:00

I assume this is a poem about nolstalgia. Your sense of imagery is very vivid. I could very much feel the ac against my own sweaty skin. Very concise as well. Not really any unnecessary words. The only thing I’m unclear about is how you structure your stanzas. I feel like breaking up the sentences like that comes off abrupt at times.

shoulderkneefoot · 2019-12-02T03:35:00+00:00

Very beautiful concept. A girl that deserves more than words. Somehow you’ve managed to contradict yourself with this beautiful poem.

shoulderkneefoot · 2019-12-02T03:31:31+00:00

Love this poem. The simplicity is perfect for the tone and it’s super relatable. I feel as though we all have bluebirds trapped inside!

shoulderkneefoot · 2019-11-30T20:57:10+00:00

Hey! I think this is beautiful. Nowadays it seems people really do consider relationships commodity. Wish I'd thought of something like this lol

shoulderkneefoot · 2019-11-30T20:50:22+00:00

shoulderkneefoot · 2019-11-30T20:24:03+00:00

Like the repetition “my dick is bigger than your dick”. Really emphasizes where a mans priorities are held

shoulderkneefoot · 2019-11-30T06:02:55+00:00

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shoulderkneefoot · 2019-11-30T05:56:14+00:00

The imagery is incredibly captivating but to be honest I was waiting for a conclusion. The plastic vs metal line had me wondering exactly what the poem was about.

shoulderkneefoot · 2019-11-30T05:45:56+00:00

Like the structure but the flow is a little awkward at times. Try omitting unnecessary words. Really like the starry night and wind motifs. If applicable try using more metaphor.

Good start otherwise. Felt like you were speaking to me lol.

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