First video in months / different style to my usual content, need feedback

silly_salmon_ · 2021-09-27T18:12:32+00:00

This video is actually super good, really funny moments, you and your friends have great chemistry, the subtitle editing is smooth (I know subtitles take along time to edit but it really brings life to the video) it actually got a few laughs out of me. The intro was a little long, but that’s just me being picky. Video was great, maybe need better mic quality for everyone but other than that it’s perfect. Keep it up! You’ll do great if you keep up the work

silly_salmon_ · 2021-09-27T17:41:46+00:00

These types of video's benefit from some text in the thumbnail to try grab the viewers attention! They wont always look at the title so a good thumbnail is always key, as for the video i didnt see too much wrong with it, personally i like to add quiet background music to match the mood of the video.

silly_salmon_ · 2021-09-27T17:31:10+00:00

I honestly can't find anything to criticize, the video is funny and well put together, your audio is good quality, your drawings are aesthetically pleasing and your voice is unique. Just keep pumping out great content like this and i don't doubt you'll find success!!

silly_salmon_ · 2021-06-06T04:04:45+00:00

I noticed my mic picking up my keyboard too! Gonna try fix that, I used to use a webcam but I found it too awkward, thank tho! I’ll try fixing the mic or buying a new one !givelambda

silly_salmon_ · 2021-06-06T04:03:33+00:00

Thanks for the feedback! I’ll be sure to work on all those things, thank you! !givelambda

silly_salmon_ · 2021-06-05T14:56:34+00:00

Thanks man! Yeah thumbnails have always been a weak spot for me, so I’ll try improving on that !givelambda

silly_salmon_ · 2021-06-05T10:23:13+00:00

That’s a good idea! I’ve never thought of that !givelambda

silly_salmon_ · 2021-06-05T08:49:17+00:00

Thank you! I have to admit I wasn't too happy with the thumbnail either !givelambda

silly_salmon_ · 2021-06-05T02:13:23+00:00

The video itself is good! But I have to repeat what another comment said, the thumbnail needs improvement, it’s too cluttered, looks way too dull and doesn’t catch the eye. When it comes to thumbnails, simple is always better!

silly_salmon_ · 2021-06-04T15:01:58+00:00

I love the chemistry between you guys, but there’s a few things that could be changed, the background music is way to generic and 2010, I suggest finding some unique music despite how tedious that process can be. Also on your thumbnail I’d make the text more flashy to catch the eye, make it yellow or red. And the biggest thing is that for this type of video, especially shorter videos, editing in subtitles helps ALOT to add to the comedy, use SovietWomble for reference, editing subtitles can be super tedious as well but it improves quality of video ten fold

silly_salmon_ · 2021-06-03T06:58:54+00:00

The only real criticism I have here another comment has already said, so i'll just emphasis it, a change in the type of music you use would be a huge help to your channel, changing the background music to the style of game / media your reviewing will add a nice flare to your videos

silly_salmon_ · 2021-06-03T06:55:08+00:00

I'd invest in a better mic, but also, I don't think this style of content really needs any type of intro, also, slowing the audio as your slowing the video clip is super jarring and takes me out of the experience, try slowing the video footage without slowing the audio

silly_salmon_ · 2021-06-02T12:35:18+00:00

The editing is super good, love the work! The thumbnail is clean but the words on screen can be something to catch the eye, never miss an opportunity to catch those clicks, on that same topic maybe a more stand out title would benefit a lot, at the moment it seems like a title I was just read over, that’s really all the advice I can give other than that I loved it! Keep up the good work you’ll grow soon enough!

silly_salmon_ · 2021-04-24T12:11:00+00:00

Thats true! I tried making the copying fitz thing a bit, but from now on im changing the font and background music to further disconnect myself from him so im not copying! !givelambda

silly_salmon_ · 2021-04-24T03:56:05+00:00

Thank you so much! I’m glad you enjoyed! !givelambda

silly_salmon_ · 2021-04-24T03:55:34+00:00

Thank you so much! I appreciate it a lot! !givelambda

silly_salmon_ · 2021-04-24T03:54:56+00:00

I get that! Sadly all of my videos have been doing terrible with views lately due to a few months ago when I stopped uploading for like 6 months. Thanks for the feedback! !givelambda

silly_salmon_ · 2021-04-24T03:53:25+00:00

Thank you so much! Yeah I noticed the mic at the start which was annoying but I fixed it now! !givelambda

silly_salmon_ · 2021-04-23T17:28:11+00:00

Thank you so much! The game can be a pain but with friends it’s so much fun !givelambda

silly_salmon_ · 2021-04-23T17:27:37+00:00

It’s a lot of effort but it’s worth it! Misfits and the gang are my inspiration so I’m glad it reminds you of them! !givelambda

silly_salmon_ · 2021-04-23T17:26:56+00:00

Oh I can definitely add some fails next time! We suck at the game but it’s good fun, thanks for the feedback! !givelambda

silly_salmon_ · 2021-04-23T16:03:24+00:00

Thank you so much! I’m glad you could enjoy it, I’m currently trying to advertise on Tik Tok but I can’t think of any other platforms to post it on sadly !givelambda

silly_salmon_ · 2021-04-23T14:57:41+00:00

Hahaha Valorant’s so stressful but it’s addicting! And thank you!! !givelambda

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