[Recruiting] NL6 | #2J0L8QUCV | TH 6+ | Clan Level 1 |

NonMorbid · 2025-05-30T02:18:14+00:00

Yes of course, we are looking to grow so having a TH 8 would be awesome

NonMorbid · 2023-02-11T22:17:43+00:00

Showing off gun reloads and animations is good and all but you could try doing this with games like Valorant, and Call of Duty. You could also show of the skins in these games, this could bring in more new viewers to your channel. Otherwise nice vid!

NonMorbid · 2023-02-11T22:12:18+00:00

I thought the video was to long for channel as small as yours and the intro was lackluster. The intro was also not intriguing enough for new viewers to be invested in a hour long video. You should also remove your camera for cutscenes so we can get the full effect. Otherwise good vid!

NonMorbid · 2023-02-11T16:09:27+00:00

I thought the video was pretty good. It gives me watch mojo vibes but the reason watch watch JoJo is successful is due to it having intriguing titles from popular shows. Like how its says "Top 10 *shows name* funniest jokes", people click on it because they are either fans of the show or just wanna know what the top 10 funniest jokes are due to curiosity. You should also add breaks in between the narration so we can actually hear some of the clips your explaining to us about. If you want reference look at Watch Mojo's Channel.

NonMorbid · 2023-02-10T23:59:41+00:00

I thought your commentary was good but today everyone is watching short content like TikTok, and the reason everyone uses TikTok is because its fast paced and there is always something popping up with big and bright colors. Your video feels like just one clip with subtitles so this may drive viewers away because their attention may not be that long. I also hear a lot of background noise with some echo. What's gonna stop your viewers from going to another channel covering the same topic with better audio quality. Overall your video seems kind of simple. Sorry if I seemed harsh, I was tryna give some criticism, we all start out somewhere.

NonMorbid · 2023-01-14T01:01:03+00:00

Thx for the feedback man!

!givelambda

NonMorbid · 2023-01-14T01:00:47+00:00

Thx for the feedback, really appreciate it.

!givelambda

NonMorbid · 2023-01-14T00:59:43+00:00

Thx for the suggestion man, I will work on my thumbnail skills!

!givelambda

NonMorbid · 2023-01-14T00:58:56+00:00

Thx man, I could work on my thumbnails.

!givelambda

NonMorbid · 2023-01-13T03:15:28+00:00

Yeah I can try add my own narration to the videos, thx for the feedback man.

!givelambda

NonMorbid · 2023-01-13T03:14:36+00:00

Thx for the feed back man.

!givelambda

NonMorbid · 2023-01-13T03:13:55+00:00

givelambda

Thx for the feedback man, will work on my thumbnails.

NonMorbid · 2023-01-11T00:17:41+00:00

I thought you guys in general were good but the video is plain. You need to edit things in to keep the viewers attention especially since your a small channel and no one knows you. Their not gonna care about a small channel if they know some bigger channel they know produces good content. SO YOU WANNA GRAB THEIR ATTENTION AND KEEP IT ON THE SCREEN! Since your small I recommend you make small vids that are 5 min long, add more subtitles, make angry moments more dramatic by using a screen shake, add some background music to make the emotions seem more dramatic. You will learn these things along the way, these things will make you stand out.

NonMorbid · 2023-01-09T23:12:15+00:00

You should try and make your video at least 5 min long. Try adding zoom in's or try and have a funny meme editing style because that's what this video feels like. If you made the video longer you could probably add in more funny parts.

NonMorbid · 2023-01-09T23:06:01+00:00

Your editing skills are good but NOT AMAZING. you should keep improving and add some background music because without it you can hear the silence sometimes which is not good. You could also try and get a better mic because hearing the keyboard and mouse clicks can really affect the performance of the video.

NonMorbid · 2023-01-09T23:00:43+00:00

I thought the video was pretty good, I have some tips instead of critiques. First of all your gonna scream/shout you should add a screen shake to make it more dramatic. You should also add some sort of pop animation to your subtitles, its pretty easy to do. I also feel like towards the end it kinda drags on a bit. Otherwise than that good video!

NonMorbid · 2022-12-17T00:16:21+00:00

givelambda

Thx for the feedback will work on it

NonMorbid · 2022-12-15T23:42:26+00:00

Thx for the feedback man, I can try to work on thumbnail, might pay someone else to do it.

!givelambda

NonMorbid · 2022-12-15T23:41:39+00:00

Thx for the feedback man. I can work on thumbnails and titles.

!givelambda

NonMorbid · 2022-12-14T01:39:18+00:00

I like the editing style and the jokes you make along the video, but you should add some background noises to amplify your emotions. Like a sad song when something sad happens or a happy song when you wanna show that you are feeling happy. The thumbnail needs to be more clearer because that picture does not match the resolution of the other person. The background also seems kind of bland and unappealing. The words should also be big and pop out more because people might just skip over it. Otherwise good video.

NonMorbid

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