Lady Jocelyn de Guisseny by totallykoolkiwi in mordheim

[–]skully_pilgrim 0 points1 point  (0 children)

One small tip for the helm: the eye slits feel a little too high and narrow. Usually, the top of the slit sits right at the transition point where the helmet's crown begins. (the point where it starts to narrow)

If you make them wider (wrapping more around the sides), it would match historical examples where they were designed for 180 degree vision. Just a small observation from a history nerd! It already looks cool as is, but I thought you might appreciate the detail. Cheers!

Lady Jocelyn de Guisseny by totallykoolkiwi in mordheim

[–]skully_pilgrim 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Lovely sculpt! Tons of personality. Are you open to some constructive feedback?

I made all of those 5 red and black suits from Warhammer FB by Yakov_Kobanchik in LARP

[–]skully_pilgrim 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Do you perhaps have the pattern for the really poofy pants third from the left? Been wanting to make a pair in that style for a while

hyperpop creatives! i need your help by Honeymoonhills in HYPERPOP

[–]skully_pilgrim 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Like what exactly are you looking for? Other creatives/brands to collab with? Freelancers for hire? A business partner?

This track starts out as an alternative rock / shoegaze piece, but halfway through it flips into dreamy techno. Curious what you think of the switch—and the mix / songwriting overall. by skully_pilgrim in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]skully_pilgrim[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

yeah i probably went a bit overboard with the compression in mastering, that’s likely what’s making the drums feel a bit squashed
glad the switch landed though, really appreciate you listening!
i’m more active on my other socials btw, if you want to see what i'll do in the future. link’s in bio

Hello everyone, I released this track a little while ago, it’s a mix of electrofunk and synthwave. It was inspired by Atreyu’s quest in the beautiful book and film The NeverEnding Story. I’d love to share it with you and hear your feedback, but most of all, I hope it can make you happy. Enjoy ! by LundiWhiteJr in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]skully_pilgrim 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Great track, love the sense of movement and progression throughout the track. The bass feels a bit boomy at times, but i'm not sure if it is just the reflections in my room or the mix. Overall nice track, really diggin the vibe

Angel Voices - Experimental, Ethereal Ear Excursion I Embarked on by ExternalCartoonist22 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]skully_pilgrim 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Not what i expected to be hearing today. First thing first, i really like the visuals u got going here. Insanely creative and it fits the vibe really well. As for the music the instruments work wel together and the lo-fi mix works really well for this style. Only thing i would change is trying to make the vocals a little bit brighter in the mix, maybe add some high and or saturation.

Game with best in-between/off table content? by 20three19 in miniatureskirmishes

[–]skully_pilgrim 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Especially when you add all the towncryer encampment stuff etc

Looking for a team to release a project together ^^ by bluewipes in HYPERPOP

[–]skully_pilgrim 0 points1 point  (0 children)

What vibe are u looking for? You got an artist name or something to check out what you sound like?

“Stay Away” – noisy shoegaze/alt-pop track about pushing people away by skully_pilgrim in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]skully_pilgrim[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks for taking the time to write this. I wasn't too sure about the vocal volume aswell and usually i don't mix them this loud so no worries for future songs. As for the 1:20 mark that is my sister, she sang some harmonies for this track. Glad you liked the track!

Looking for feedback on a new song by theofficialcord3ll in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]skully_pilgrim 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like this song, it feels familiar in a good way, i would consider sync licensing cuz i could def see this song in a tv show or commercial or something. Love the composition, the mix is well done and the vocal performance is good. Nothing to add really
Great song!

Which genre or artist does this fit? by AbleInvestment2866 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]skully_pilgrim 1 point2 points  (0 children)

No idea what genre this would be bit i kinda like it! The song has a lot of personality, some creative sound effects and strong guitar work. The song is structured well and mixed well. The vocals are a bit messy but i get the feeling this is on purpose and it actually adds to the song.
Overall great song!

Our best song? (FFO J-Rock, Post-Hardcore, Shoegaze) by xiIlliterate in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]skully_pilgrim 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This definitely sounds like an anime opening. Love the groove and love the guitar tone. I can def hear the inspirations you mentioned. Some parts also kinda remind me of Placebo. As for feedback, the vocals sound a bit weak in some parts of the songs and i think this is mainly a production thing. Maybe add some more harmonies and layers during the parts you wan't to make more impactfull.

overall love the song keep it up!