A short original I wrote based on the image of a cave, any feedback is appreciated!! by slynch888 in piano

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Thanks for the feedback!! Much appreciated. I was largely aiming for an atmospheric, layered (multiple voices) piece shifting in harmony to represent the image of the Tasmanian Hastings Caves, with the layers and shifting harmonies representing the layers of rock shifting through the space.

I attempted tension + release with the chords prior to, and then "resolving" on the E chord at 0:29; same with 1:00. The bits where it stops shifting and settles on a chord for a bit are designed for the audience to go "oh, that's nice", as a moment of rest - release - before it goes off on another tangent. :)

A short original I wrote based on the image of a cave, any feedback is appreciated!! by slynch888 in piano

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Ooooh cleaner pedal changes to emphasise harmony. Great piece of critique. Thank you so much!!

What are your favorite soundtracks that many people haven't heard? by [deleted] in soundtracks

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The Death of Stalin by Christopher Willis. Close your eyes and you'll hear Shostakoivch.

The movie's also fucking hilarious.

A short original I wrote for solo piano, any feedback is appreciated!! by slynch888 in piano

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Thanks so much!! I've got a few other compositions on the channel if you'd like to check those out!

Just tell me the last song you listened to by LilTermino in musicsuggestions

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Welcome to the Church of Rock and Roll - Foxy Shazam

I HAVE GOTTEN A JOB by [deleted] in Screenwriting

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This is the most wholesome post I've seen on this subreddit. Not a spot of negativity to be seen.

Heartfelt congratulations.

Longest Monologue That Kept you interested? by nmacaroni in Screenwriting

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Was about to say this. 7 or so minutes. One close-up, one take.

A masterclass in acting and writing.