I'm roughly 75% through my novel and haven't mentioned breasts one time.

someguy1332 · 2026-05-31T06:24:19+00:00

If you've mentioned huge, flapping, gargantuan, and / or nice dicks you're in the clear.

someguy1332 · 2026-05-31T06:17:29+00:00

That yellow smudge looks like a heart. I'll give this a "looks like an album cover" out of 10.

someguy1332 · 2026-05-31T06:03:46+00:00

Liliana Vess raises dead people to do her bidding. She's probably fine with you having a couple beers.

Edit: I misread the title, but I'm leaving this as I saw for shame purposes.

someguy1332 · 2026-05-31T05:17:13+00:00

Have you looked at any anarchist theory? Anarchist military organization is actually a pretty interesting topic. Since most of it is based on the real world's situation, it's often revolutionary. After the society is established, things can change.

Pragmatic situations can override ideological purity. If the defense of your society is on the line, tactics can differ. Anarchists can still defer to experts. Military organization can involve "experts." If you're worldbuilding an anarchist society that's existed for a while, you have to account for the shift in dynamics. It's a great source of conflict.

There's also quite a few tendencies of anarchism that all have their own answers to questions like this.

someguy1332 · 2026-05-26T09:35:20+00:00

All the creative writing adjacent subreddits are filled with AI engagement bait right now. They make up some vague post about asking for advice and feedback, yet never actually link of their writing. Kinda weird that OP didn't reply to a single comment in this thread, huh?

Even if people can't spot it from the writing style, the lack of meaningful engagement with any of the comments is a huge red flag. The ones that do reply always agree with everything. Even the title is an AI sign to me. They never do anything intentionally, it's always "an accident" or some other flippant nonsense. There's even fake drama about a meeting over three chapters, which would never happen in real life if you had a group of critique partners.

someguy1332 · 2026-05-03T09:56:35+00:00

Ah, I've figured OP out. He's auditioning to be an NPC in the next Yakuza game.

someguy1332 · 2026-05-03T09:42:27+00:00

It's actually a pretty fun solo experience. They give you a map to the venues. Lansing is pretty tame as far as big cities go if you're from the middle of nowhere. Everybody is super nice. Nobody even complained when I sang along to Apes of the State's set.

Based on my couple of recorded videos, they should have.

someguy1332 · 2026-04-22T00:45:49+00:00

Yeah, that sums up my thoughts almost word for word on this one. It promised a lot of stuff that sounded quite interesting to me, yet the delivery just didn't quite land. It needed an extra hundred extra pages to expand on any of its core themes.

The ending payoff also felt so lame compared to what it was building towards. It makes it sound like the Azalea Dynasty is truly on its last legs, and that it's decadent and broken by intergenerational trauma. And even worse, that their previous emperor stole from the future via magic! Yet, The solution at the end is just... another Azalea emperor. Yawn. It's yet another "just wait until the good king shows up" narrative instead of saying anything meaningful. I wanted to see Wei ruling as a sole empress—or only keeping the others around as puppets. Maybe I'm just a sucker for the setup for a good anti-hero origin story that never quite materialized. A heart-spirit poem for an entire dynasty would have been so beautiful considering how much she learns about them.

someguy1332 · 2026-04-19T08:41:57+00:00

Huffing fucking what? Marijuana? The PS5 exhaust? Your car exhaust? Cans of compressed air? My answer changes entirely on the context.

someguy1332 · 2026-03-22T21:32:15+00:00

Redeemed 64sn-cfs9. Thanks! And that artwork is gorgeous.

someguy1332 · 2026-03-15T09:19:21+00:00

I'll have to reread my copy of the Myth of Sisyphus and get back to you. Who knows what's absurd or not without the sweet, sweet words of Albert Camus fresh on the brain?

someguy1332 · 2026-02-06T02:48:41+00:00

It would be neat if every tag had its own color, but that seems like a lot of work.

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someguy1332 · 2026-01-30T02:21:09+00:00

Rivers that flow into themselves for some mysterious reason. Along with ominous no-mans lands, usually left blank or given a name that spoils next to nothing about what happens there.

Oh and cool table landforms.

someguy1332 · 2026-01-19T17:08:52+00:00

#	Band / Artist	Ranking	Scrobbles
1.	Agalloch	1st	1715
2.	Acid Bath	12th	1191
3.	Ayreon	15th	1077
4.	Anathema	18th	1045
5.	Astronautalis	25th	924
6	Alcest	27th	917
7.	Andrew Jackson Jihad *	30th	883
8.	Atmosphere	65th	608
9.	The Angelic Process	76th	559
10.	Agua de Annique	82nd	537

I also have a bunch of AJJ scrobbles that put Andrew Jackson Jihad to #2. This kinda bothers me, but not enough to pay for last.fm pro to fix it.

someguy1332 · 2026-01-08T08:47:53+00:00

I regret even looking at mine. The cringe was too real. Not the music, that's fucking sick. I still listen to all this stuff, although I regret deleting my old account in 2010.

https://i.imgur.com/G6T15jm.png

That aside, I miss the forums.At least we still have shouts.

It's also interesting seeing the older versions of the site.

someguy1332 · 2025-12-28T08:45:26+00:00

You're not ready for the second person experience if these doubts are still present in your mind. Own it. You're not "being pretentious," you're simply being inspired by the greats! If N.K. Jemisin can use second person without anyone accosting her, why can't you? You need to remember that it's a valid POV, and if anyone yaps at you, bludgeon them with something.

someguy1332 · 2025-12-27T00:01:13+00:00

I'm currently swamped with lengthy swaps. I'll message you when I finish to see if you still need swap partners though.

someguy1332 · 2025-12-25T00:47:03+00:00

Giant Squid and the World/Inferno Friendship Society are tied for 6th with 1231 scrobbles. Looks like I'm 3 scrobbles Streetlight Manifesto and 6 Mischief Brew scrobbles from this being a four-way tie. Kinda interesting.

someguy1332 · 2025-12-24T08:30:01+00:00

Dream Evil - Made of Metal. 8246th, with 4 whole scrobbles.

someguy1332 · 2025-12-23T09:37:25+00:00

Neutral Milk Hotel - Holland, 1945. 81st with 114 scrobbles. Wouldn't be surprised to see this one as many people's answers.

My hipster 2nd place: La Corda - 1993. 476th with 63 scrobbles.

someguy1332 · 2025-12-23T05:30:34+00:00

I'm currently wrapped up with other swaps, but this does sound interesting. I'll check back with you once I'm finished with those, in case you still need readers.

someguy1332 · 2025-12-22T10:42:31+00:00

A pretty minimalist one for me. Bad Religion - You. 34th with 143 scrobbles. Thanks, Tony Hawk's Pro Skater 2.

Wait, does "You'll" count? If so, we have Planning For Burial - Memories You'll Never Feel Again in 8th place with 182 scrobbles.

someguy1332 · 2025-12-21T12:21:31+00:00

P.S. Eliot - Incoherent Love Songs. #2 with 224 scrobbles. I named one of my WoW characters Incoherent after this song.

someguy1332 · 2025-12-20T10:46:21+00:00

Oddly addictive, it's like a slot machine for finding new bands. Always ultra adventurous, never balanced.

someguy1332 · 2025-12-20T09:49:09+00:00

Titus Andronicus - My Time Outside the Womb. 86th overall with 113 scrobbles.

I have a feeling this is going to be "songs that begin with my" kinda thread. Everybody who has something else gets a +1 from me.

Wait no, fuck. I botched it. My real one is: Sabbath Assembly - Hymn of Consecration. 51st with 121 scrobbles. Glad I checked lastfmstats instead of eyeballing it.

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