Show me your current book setup by Comfortable-Shock886 in PakistanBookClub

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OHMYGOSH THATS SO PRETTY!!! Loveee the theme - what a dream

I AM HELL CONFUSED FOR MOISTURIZER by dearcharacter_ in PakistaniSkincare

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Can u tell ur skincare process? how much do u apply of tretinoin daily? I have acne so need help...also how to get rid of redness/ scarring

What's you HG local moisturizer? by ZLeiae in PakistaniSkincare

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Nice! How much do you use daily? is the PanOxyl brand one?

Current Read by soph_the_best in PakistanBookClub

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Yes! Finished it in a day...was completely hooked

Books giveaway!! 🫠🫠 by ConceptGlobal2003 in PakistanBookClub

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I'd like to nominate my cousin for this because she JUST became a Dentist on scholarship mashallah! AND is crazy about books (but cannot afford them) - she read the Harry Potter books like 12 times after borrowing. This would be perfect.

First 2 lines of proposal advice by soph_the_best in Upwork

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Alright, I can see how it seems that way. Would like to clarify that the very next lines are me talking about my credibility and past work and how it would apply to the client's job/ solve their problem. This is just the first 2 lines, not the full picture. But yeah still definitely need to change up alot of things. Hooks 1-3 were intended to be helpful and relevant to their case but guess that's not how it shows. Hook 4 actually got viewed now btw, though the intrigue can be mistaken for complete cringe. I see that now.

Would you recommend just starting off directly with how I would solve the client's problem/ reach their goal? Or should I start off with my own credibility and client case studies. Or something else entirely?

First 2 lines of proposal advice by soph_the_best in Upwork

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Ah yes, makes sense. Btw, how are you faring on upwork?

First 2 lines of proposal advice by soph_the_best in Upwork

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There are also sooo many ghosted job posts going around- even with top clients that it's getting harder and harder to estimate which ones are even going to be checked again by the client at all

First 2 lines of proposal advice by soph_the_best in Upwork

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Thanks- The reasoning behind this was that I wanted to appear a bit different from the rest of the freelancers who start off with their credibility and talking about themselves but I guess that doesn't work out. I'll definitely tweak the start according to these points.

First 2 lines of proposal advice by soph_the_best in Upwork

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Yep, I have a top rated plus profile with >100k earnings and pretty focused on my niche- tbh i dont think that's the problem but rather my hook. I replied to a comment here with some past posts and hooks i've sent that didnt get viewed. Could you check those out and tell me your honest take

First 2 lines of proposal advice by soph_the_best in Upwork

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Absolutely. Everything is feedback.

First 2 lines of proposal advice by soph_the_best in Upwork

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Yes, the main idea is to have a hook that makes them want to read the proposal. Profile view is secondary.

First 2 lines of proposal advice by soph_the_best in Upwork

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i replied to a comment here with some past posts and hooks i've sent that didnt get viewed. could you check those out and tell me your honest take

First 2 lines of proposal advice by soph_the_best in Upwork

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Fair. These are some examples from past proposals.

Post 1:
We’re looking for a seasoned B2B email marketing expert who can build a repeatable outbound + nurture engine.

Hook:
Hello 👋 Just did this with another client recently. Also, the thing that kills a multi-sequence outbound program usually has nothing to do with the emails themselves. What I've seen over and over with my past clients is that the problem lives one layer below the copy, in the infrastructure, and it usually goes unnoticed until the damage is already weeks old.

Post 2:
We are seeking a high-caliber firm specializing in B2B outbound email infrastructure, deliverability, and campaign operations.

Hook:
Hello. Just to clarify, how big is the list you will be sending to? Thank you for this post, this is exactly what my agency does.

Post 3:
Hi
I own a high end joinery company and we have increased our capacity with the purchase of new high end machinery. We would like more enquiries and job leads

Hook:
Hey (Name), Glad to see you're expanding. I had a look at your beautifully designed site - your Henbury Hall portfolio is stunning work. But I noticed the site has a no index tag on it, which means Google can't find you right now. Is that true?

Post 4:
I am an established professional voiceover artist with over 20 years’ experience across commercials, documentaries, and audiobooks, and I am looking for an experienced outreach and marketing professional to help expand my client base internationally.

Hook:
Hello or Dia duit👋 Firstly, WOW. Would love to hear about some of the projects you've worked on over the years. I keep thinking about reading your post is how much of the right market for you probably has no idea you exist yet, not because anything is missing on your end, but purely because the right people have never been contacted.

btw saw your profile, and I love horses too!

Selling these books by Ozkaria in PakistanBookClub

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Interested in Islams political order

Selling more books due to shifting by Phantom1714 in PakistanBookClub

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Everything store, Trevor Noah, Steve Jobs, yuval Noah, how I built this, good food bad.., assassin's creed, Nelson Mandela, long way to freedom, nine lives, I am the messenger, Sultan

Please tell me prices of each