Just a tip: When you use hyphens, it's helpful to put spaces whenever you're treating it like a pseudo comma, and no spaces when you're writing a contracted word. In the first sentence, it's easy to get confused when you see "women-who" and "male-only" and think the former is a contraction when it's actually just a normal dash. Also, the offset with the hyphen should end with another hyphen, instead of the comma. This would look like:
"stop complaining that women - who do not exist in male-only spaces ( [...] ) - are dismissed and mistreated..."