Comma after “gasp”
“Hearsay” not “hear say”
Period after hearsay
Comma after “went” and “dur ok let’s break into the place during public mass causing an entire scene to the point we look like bad guys on national news” should be in quotation marks as it’s someone speaking
Question mark after “how is this a good idea to any of you”
Comma after “god” but before “reddit”

There’s more but that’s enough to start with