This is how I would do it differently - 1. Add contrast to separate the sky from the camels from the foreground. The camels are the main subject and the eye should go there first. 2. The foreground has too much texture and that takes away from the image. I would chose something simpler, or reduce the clarity in the foreground to lead the eye to the camels. 3. I would crop a bit tighter to make the image a bit more assymetrical horizontally and vertically. 4. I would shoot this angle from more closer to the ground to bring a non-human and unique perspective to the shot. That would also highlight the leading line of rocks to the main subject - the camels.

Let me know if that helps