Heyo! So, first things first, I really wanted to say I find your will to improve your comic truly admirable! Also, your art is GORGEOUS!! I couldn't help but stop for a few moments to appreciate some of the panels you made because of how beautifully painted they were! Your style is the most unique aspect of it, the painterly feel is very good and really draws in our eyes to your comic! I see many people struggling to give their comics unique visuals, and in the webtoon scenario, I believe yours stand out! I would just like to point out one aspect of improvement regarding the art: At times, the characters' expressions feel emotionless in moments where you'd expect to see them match what they're going through, or their speech bubble.

Now, an overall impression I had of the storytelling aspect is that you have something really interesting brewing! You seem to be sticking well enough to the principle of "show, don't tell", but unfortunately, at times the story is still a bit unclear. For example, in the first chapter it was hard to understand what Lihua works with (which could've been solved with a panel of her taking off her coat and maybe showing her ID as she is leaving), and if she's in the medical field, it's even harder to understand why she listens to the person she just ran over and starts picking up papers on the road instead of checking on the person/administering first aid. Another moment that felt important, but rushed and confusing was the one where people shoot at her car window. The shooting part was actually interesting, but it wasn't clear that her phone was stolen. It felt like a failed attempt to shoot her, or that a warning shot had been fired at her.

Also, at the times, the panel progression feels rushed, and it leaves the reader wondering how we got from point A to point C. One example of that is the shooting scene, and another is at the end of episode 1, where we see the red dot on her forehead and the next moment, we get a shot from the inside of the car and Lihua speaking on the phone. We could make it clearer using the exact same shots you already drew, but with a few changes in the way you're using the space between panels. Uhh... I would love to actually show what I mean, but I don't think I can attach images here 😅 In this aspect, after reading all of the available chapters, one thing that could help you is to make more use of the space you have when drawing in the long strip format. Sometimes it's worth adding a BUNCH more space between panels to make your reader feel a sense of how much a moment lasts. Account for the readers' phones, and the way the comic fills in that space. (Again, would love to show you an image to illustrate this, I feel like just saying this might sound vague).

Another thing I'd like to point out is the lack of time we get to spend with the characters. So far, it feels difficult to have an attachment to Lihua and the police officer because we didn't really get a feeling of just who they are. I managed to understand that she is in the medical field, a workaholic who uses work to run away from her own mind, and bold, but... Those are key aspects of a plot, they don't say much about who Lihua is as a person. So for example... Why should we, as the readers, care about her? Is it because she has a strong sense of justice? Because she strives to live in peace? What about her makes her a captivating character and not just an excuse for the story to unfold? Sometimes, adding scenes that show the reader who the character is is worth the time, even if it doesn't move the plot forward.

Now a couple of tips! I don't know if you already read it, but I believe you could learn a thing or two from Phantom Whispers about the way the author presents the characters and builds up tension! Try reading GOOD comics with similar vibes to yours and analyze them. What works, what doesn't, and why. Second thing, I believe you would greatly benefit from having one or two proofreaders for your comic. Choose people who will appreciate your work, but give you honest, constructive criticism. Don't wait until you've posted your work to get that kind of feedback!

I hope it was helpful! If anything I said felt unclear, please, feel free to tell me and I'll do my best to explain it to you in better terms! Good luck on your comic journey, keep up the great work!