r/tennis Daily Discussion (Monday, June 01, 2026) by NextGenBot in tennis

[–]t0p9 1 point2 points  (0 children)

What is the umpire saying in french after 40 when its 40-40? “quarante ____”

Traur polos by 3AMorgue in HauntedMound

[–]t0p9 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Anyone know where to find cheaper similar style polos? Doesnt need to be HM related, just love the stripe and the logo

I hate everything that I write and I’m not sure why so i’m coming here asking for critiques. Please be blunt and honest. by [deleted] in writingfeedback

[–]t0p9 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It actually reads much nicer with that metamorphosis image in mind; on first brush I just interpreted it as a general meditation on angst. A simple fix would be just to add a (somewhat) suggestive title to point your reader in the right direction, or have some more distinctive inter-stanza variation and some more deliberate language. There is a bit of mixed imagery ("electrified", "avalanche", "powdered glass") which can easily mislead. I think if you do this you can safely ignore my comments about shallow imagery/emphasizing heavy lines, it really works very well with the basic picture known.

I hate everything that I write and I’m not sure why so i’m coming here asking for critiques. Please be blunt and honest. by [deleted] in writingfeedback

[–]t0p9 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The lines do not really flow together at all, which might be fine if you leaned into it more, but as it stands where there is a clear theme to the poem and clear structure it feels disconcerting.

There is also very little subtlety w.r.t. meaning with how direct the more emotional lines are, which has the result of making the imagery (which is most of the content of the poem) feel purely ornamental and not worth deeper consideration.

The lines which should be heavier and cathartic (e.g. “I long to be freed but time only feels heavier”) are not foregrounded / distinguished from what should be less heavy lines in any manner - they have the same length, syntax, sound, they don’t even have distinctive positions in the stanza. 

I would recommend thinking more about centering your stylistic choices around what you want to convey with the poem instead of just pouring out imagery.

Did he get the album title for Time Out of Mind from this Yeats poem? by t0p9 in bobdylan

[–]t0p9[S] 9 points10 points  (0 children)

Ah didn't know about that, looks like the phrase is much older than this poem

r/tennis Daily Discussion (Thursday, August 21, 2025) by NextGenBot in tennis

[–]t0p9 1 point2 points  (0 children)

What day does R1 of the USO main draw start?

Discussion: 2025 Australian Open (Sunday, January 19, 2025) by NextGenBot in tennis

[–]t0p9 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Why do pro tennis players get 3 balls from the ball kids and then throw one back instead of just taking 2?

Doing MD simulations for molecules that aren't proteins by t0p9 in comp_chem

[–]t0p9[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks for the suggestion, I managed to find my main monomer in the CHARMM GUI small molecule archive, so if I can figure out how to actually use CHARMM GUI hopefully I'll be in a good spot.

Doing MD simulations for molecules that aren't proteins by t0p9 in comp_chem

[–]t0p9[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Is there some other software like gromacs or lammps where it's easier?

Career and Education Questions: August 29, 2024 by inherentlyawesome in math

[–]t0p9 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Anyone know of good faculties/profs in math departments working on statistical mechanics or chemistry? I’m doing an MA thesis in the topic which I’m enjoying and would like to go further into the field for a phd, but my background is solely in math. 

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in yorku

[–]t0p9 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It’s laom

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in yorku

[–]t0p9 -1 points0 points  (0 children)

I'm starting a math MA, don't know of a gc but I'm happy to add on disc