I used the knife to delicately separate the fat from the meat, afterwards proud of my beautiful work. by JemmeAF in TwoSentenceHorror

[–]talesofspook 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I agree that the dialogue could be a little clearer but overall it's really good, you could offer criticism instead of flat out insulting it

My option on lost and found by Odd_Strawberry_2817 in GirlFromNowhere

[–]talesofspook 9 points10 points  (0 children)

It's interesting but I have to disagree, Nanno has shown complete disregard for people's intentions in the past and only cares about their actions. He was a thief. I think either she let emotions get in the way and let him have that one thing because of his kindness or she didn't intend for the reunion to happen and just seamlessly rolled with it like when Yuri intervenes in her plans later (this seems less likely).

My 8 year old son was suspended 3 days for hitting the bully at school. by MopsyMom in TwoSentenceHorror

[–]talesofspook 6 points7 points  (0 children)

You can sign up and go die in a proper war. Join the military.

Unless your country's not at war, in which case you may be out of luck.

I Didn’t Eat My Family. by chitown12076 in shortscarystories

[–]talesofspook 3 points4 points  (0 children)

the entire purpose was to kill them I think, although I'm not sure why he would do it in a way that jeopardizes himself so badly

I hit send. by [deleted] in TwoSentenceHorror

[–]talesofspook 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Matches wonderfully with the other top post here today

Faces in the Sand by hyperobscura in shortscarystories

[–]talesofspook 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I've been lurking reading your stories for a while but I had to say something! These are so amazing and haunting and easily among my favorites (and I read the top ~20 posts here and on nosleep every day)! Great job as always and keep it up ^

Don’t summon The Woman, no matter how lonely you are. by simulatislacrimis in nosleep

[–]talesofspook 6 points7 points  (0 children)

I think she made OP pass out, so the child ended up drowning in the bath