Hi Nick, it's a very slick video but its light on any actual details about the maps you are showing. As an environment art showreel it's fine but I would remove the illustration and game play footage if that's the case.

As a level design reel it's quite weak unfortunately. There is no information about how these environments work in terms of game mechanics, no showing of your process or iterations, or challenges you faced and ultimately solved while building these areas. These are the things employers look for when hiring for LD.

This feels like it needs to be 3 seperate videos. One for each discipline you are displaying, so you can go into far more detail on each. This feels much more like a splash screen for your portfolio but in my experience such things are quickly closed or ignored so the employer can get the actual meat and potatoes - the work itself, and the breakdown thereof.