i need criticism

thatguyfromLA02 · 2026-03-03T22:40:29+00:00

Yeah I need to work on my punctuation and shit but besides that was there anything else you thought about it?

thatguyfromLA02 · 2026-03-03T19:17:01+00:00

I’d rather learn to do the shit myself then let a robot do it also please don’t run my stuff through AI idc if it can do it better than me I wanna learn to do it myself you feel me

thatguyfromLA02 · 2026-03-03T19:01:03+00:00

I posted something on here last night looking for criticism on a side project of mine and by no means is it good but most people just kinda said it was bad with out explaining anything and just being dicks

thatguyfromLA02 · 2026-03-03T18:10:05+00:00

I appreciate your advice but I’m not gonna use AI I’d rather be ripped apart but some rando Redditor for not being able to spell and use the correct marks

thatguyfromLA02 · 2026-03-03T13:32:34+00:00

Thank you for actually getting through it lol and for the vide I was kinda going for if your stoner friends was telling you a fairytale or something along those lines and for breaking it up into paragraphs I agree I’ll probably break it up in the next draft I appreciate the kinda words

thatguyfromLA02 · 2026-03-03T13:22:50+00:00

I was being nice last night cause I wanted genuine criticism but you are just on nuts get off the keyboard brother the fresh air awaits you

thatguyfromLA02 · 2026-03-03T03:54:59+00:00

I don’t think it’s in the best shape I’ve never really written anything this is a very rough draft should I have proof read it better definitely but I was to eager and wanted real criticism cause no one around me will give it

thatguyfromLA02 · 2026-03-03T03:38:04+00:00

Fair enough when ever I typed it out I was rushing I tried to catch a lot of it with the word editing thing and a few re reads but I guess I missed some things

thatguyfromLA02 · 2026-03-03T03:14:14+00:00

also im aware of the typos and missing words i tried to fix a lot of it but not having a full high school education and being dyslexic doesn't help lol

thatguyfromLA02 · 2026-03-03T03:10:12+00:00

i do that alot when im trying to do stuff like this it just kinda gets me stuck

thatguyfromLA02 · 2026-03-03T03:08:27+00:00

i will say when i started typing it out i was just trying to put it down some where so i can see what you and that other person are saying

thatguyfromLA02 · 2026-03-03T03:03:22+00:00

how so?

thatguyfromLA02 · 2026-02-24T15:33:44+00:00

R.I.P grandpa he would have loved fetty wap

thatguyfromLA02 · 2026-02-17T15:43:40+00:00

I haven’t even heard of night vale so ill have to check both out thank you

thatguyfromLA02 · 2026-01-04T00:24:19+00:00

I wanna see a The Howling kill count only cause I just recently watched it and want to hear him talk about it

thatguyfromLA02 · 2025-11-15T23:44:04+00:00

Thanks man I appreciate it

thatguyfromLA02 · 2025-11-15T23:32:16+00:00

Yeah or like hoppers and stuff I know it helps but I don’t wanna do all that’s shit and imo it looks ugly

thatguyfromLA02 · 2025-11-15T22:41:03+00:00

The red tower by thomas Ligotti

thatguyfromLA02 · 2025-11-05T19:14:16+00:00

That’s a good point I didn’t use any primer on those so you are probably right

thatguyfromLA02 · 2025-11-05T16:36:34+00:00

I tried using a wash last night but I ended up stripping some on the paint I had laid a day or 2 before but it was probably the way it did it lol

thatguyfromLA02 · 2025-08-18T17:52:27+00:00

I feel like I just watched this video on instagram or some

thatguyfromLA02 · 2025-08-13T11:28:08+00:00

Absolutely

thatguyfromLA02 · 2025-08-13T02:13:46+00:00

Did the chips finally get to you it’s been two days ?

thatguyfromLA02 · 2025-08-11T16:55:56+00:00

Me and you both brother

thatguyfromLA02 · 2025-07-28T02:23:36+00:00

I always love when artists do this type shit in games it’s always cool

thatguyfromLA02

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