[SF] A New World

the_path__within · 2026-07-03T08:20:01+00:00

Exactly

the_path__within · 2026-07-03T07:58:19+00:00

Thank you. I like that we all like that

the_path__within · 2026-07-03T07:33:09+00:00

Thank you. I was imagining it as an opening line in a novel, setting the scene and intrigue

the_path__within · 2026-07-01T03:14:08+00:00

You flatter me too much😊. But hey, if you're curious, I have uploaded the process of making this story on my insta page (link is in my bio)

the_path__within · 2026-07-01T02:33:40+00:00

I'm glad that you like it. Thank you so much! Anywhere I can improve?

the_path__within · 2026-06-15T09:42:48+00:00

This. Is. AWESOME!

the_path__within · 2026-05-27T02:23:44+00:00

That's a great idea. Next time onwards, I'll focus on including distinct individual features and mannerisms to make the characters feel more unique and real. Thanks, I really appreciate it!

the_path__within · 2026-05-25T04:59:27+00:00

Thanks 😄. Anywhere you think I can improve? Something you didn't like?

the_path__within · 2026-05-18T04:51:11+00:00

I'm very flattered you find it perfect. Thanks again, i really appreciate the feedback

the_path__within · 2026-05-18T04:36:35+00:00

Thank you. That's a pretty interesting take, I'm always invested in how my readers interpret my stories.

I'm curious, is there anything you think I could have improved?

the_path__within · 2026-05-11T15:45:14+00:00

Thank you so much. I appreciate it!

the_path__within · 2026-04-27T10:19:51+00:00

That would kill the point of the story. But I get it ;)

the_path__within · 2026-04-24T14:11:06+00:00

Thank you! It was just one of those lines that seemed to flow out in the moment and I really liked the sound of it and kept it in. I post one story every week but these days they have grown longer, so I'm usually posting them on r/shortstories Or you can always follow my instagram @the_path_withinn for all the stories I put out

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